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Post: 63426541_46 created on Sat, 28 May 2011 01:10:53 +0000
Posted: Sat, 28 May 2011 01:10:53 +0000

iKilledzYerNoodlez

Just some thoughts

The car accident and the name of the boy remind me of the book Burned by Ellen Hopkins. Have you read that? You should if you haven't(:

There's nothing I can say about your story now that others haven't already.

Even if you give up this though, don't delate it. Save it for later. That way if you ever do come back to it or you begin writing another story you can compare how you've improved(: Best of luck!

What's Burned about?