Diabolic-- By me

[diabolic deception]

She's a cute little angel..
So pale and fair
Oh but baby she's danger..
Even with the long blonde hair

She's diabolic!!
Dangerous
Bionic and
Treacherous!

She wants to ruin you!
And nothing more
If only you knew
What she's going for

She's diabolic!!
Dangerous
Bionic and
Treacherous!

You were doomed from the start
To fall into her red hands
And have her tear you apart
You will never understand.


Never..under....stand.

[Turnilk]

Again, not very good with poetry, but punctuation seems random here or simply forgotten about in certain places.

I also don't understand why the last words are broken up like they are. The "and"s in the phrasing "dangerous bionic and treacherous" could probably be done without as well.

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Turnilk

Again, not very good with poetry, but punctuation seems random here or simply forgotten about in certain places.

I also don't understand why the last words are broken up like they are. The "and"s in the phrasing "dangerous bionic and treacherous" could probably be done without as well.

Read your last comment on "You Just Walked Away".

[Turnilk]

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Turnilk

Again, not very good with poetry, but punctuation seems random here or simply forgotten about in certain places.

I also don't understand why the last words are broken up like they are. The "and"s in the phrasing "dangerous bionic and treacherous" could probably be done without as well.

Read your last comment on "You Just Walked Away".

Your other response does not address anything I said here. So I will consider this a non-response.

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Turnilk

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Turnilk

Again, not very good with poetry, but punctuation seems random here or simply forgotten about in certain places.

I also don't understand why the last words are broken up like they are. The "and"s in the phrasing "dangerous bionic and treacherous" could probably be done without as well.

Read your last comment on "You Just Walked Away".

Your other response does not address anything I said here. So I will consider this a non-response.

Well then I guess you can stop posting on my stuff, k?

[Turnilk]

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Well then I guess you can stop posting on my stuff, k?

That isn't how I deal with people replying to me, and I'm not going to change said policy because some random person is too lazy to come up with an actual response.

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Turnilk

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Well then I guess you can stop posting on my stuff, k?

That isn't how I deal with people replying to me, and I'm not going to change said policy because some random person is too lazy to come up with an actual response.

k