poem contest.

[Kittyusha]

best poem wins 100k. theme is dark with love. example:
Take my hand, and guide me out of my lost nightmare. May we be free forever, for my heart lives for you my love.

good luck!

[Staticrevenge]

It's a different kind of dark, I hope you'll appreciate.

Dealing

I am need,
I am want,
I am greed
you feel that?
It's tight here,
beckoning clearly,
it's so insatiable, that I could lead,
Follow into the dark,
like your skin-
smooth, wonderful,
can you feel it?
I want to watch it.
That glow,
the way you put on a show,
I can't help but reach out and caress.
But we can take it slow.
Only for the thrill,
to hold you,
to listen,
your voice like silk to me.
Glisten,
look,
you see that?
Paper bag eyes,
you see that?
I want to watch it.
I want to watch you.
You see that?
I do.
It's love.
But you don't want it do you?
You can't take it can you?
You won't fake it,
thank you.
You hear that?
Cracking,
the humming?
It's too bad.
Resonating,
they know what's coming.
That silk is sharp,
that glisten a nitch,
I'd take it anyday,
you have the itch?
You want that?
I know you do.
You hear that?
I know you do.
You see that?
I know you do.
Will you take it?
'cause I'll deal with you.

[Mon Chi Phoenix]

I went a little gory with mine.

Detailed Descriptions of My Love

For you, 
I'd give my heart,
I'd rip it right out of my chest,
I'd watch,
As the room went dark,
As it lie beating in my fist

For you,
I'd give my blood,
I'd syphon it right out of my veins,
I'd watch,
As my world turned black
As my fuel itself is drained,
I'd fill,
Your vampiric cup,
And endure my deepest pain.

I'd take a serrated knife,
And spin it around my wrist,
For the cut here marks,
For the removal of my fist,
With a sword I slice it off,
With the sharpest katana,
So you could hold my hand,
Any time you wanted,

This is my love for you,
All of it is true,
Why would I lie? 
Cause I'd rather die,
Then live a life without you.

For you,
I'd give my eyes,
I'd tear them right out of my head,
I'd go blind,
So you could see,
As my whole world goes red,

For you,
I'd give my soul,
A crucifixion so crude,
If it'd help,
Save your life,
If give my soul for the feud,
I wouldn't die,
I'd live that pain,
All so I could see you,

For petals of a flower,
I'd use the nails of my hand,
"You love me?  Love me not?"
As they fall to bloody sand,
I'd tear them off with hope,
That I'd finish with a "love me"
And wash them off with bitter pain,
In the deep blue sea,

This is my love for you,
All of it is true,
Why would I lie? 
Cause I'd rather die,
Then live a life without you.

[Kittyusha]

Both of you! those are awsome poems! heart when we get two more poems by two more people, i will choose the winner! 3nodding

[Staticrevenge]

thanks!

More people joiiinnn biggrin

[Mon Chi Phoenix]

Then I say... BUMP

[Kittyusha]

And i reply: BUMP!
And i reply again: Tell all or most of your friends about the contest. Cause a new rule has come into play: If you can get three of you friends to join, and you win, you get a bonus 100k! that comes to a total of 200k!

[June Malatesta]

((Is it bad I came up with this while listening to "Taylor the Latte Boy"? C: ))


Come Downstairs

Shimmering lights reflect placidly on those happy faces
As they slide and land on equally reflective ground
Baroque people in a baroque room
Completely ignorant of the lurking shadows.

But you, you have had enough of this.
You scowl and watch with dull grey eyes,
The perfect match to your perfect raven hair,
And a perfect match for me.

We dance, the only two dark figures in the room
Staining the crowd in an aerial view,
But we hardly notice this blinding truth
As we finish one last skip and bow.

I will slip away from this all, the mask,
And let my fingers just barely slide of yours to tease
Because I hope you'll follow me
Through the single door and down the steps.

The music and laughter contentedly dies out
As we step by step reach the depths of our secret door
Hushing eachother and letting our fingers
Trace along the rugged black walls.

Final step, and the clack echoes lightly
I light the candles to illuminate my dark little pleasures
Glimmering metal hanging from the walls
And dull iron laying on a bed.

I'd take a cloth and make you go blind
Take the metal and bind you stiff
Take my knife and carve my name
Then lift it again and lick my lips.

Entangled in my little games,
We'll play with fire, blades, and blood,
You'll yell out for help and pain
But iIll simply laugh and start again

Your futile cries will then die out,
But the games won't end just yet
You could cry and pray for mercy,
Though such is useless with a wolf.

I'll make you admit your ecstacy
Your twisted joy in all this pain
All because you were like a lamb
When you passed through the door and came downstairs.

[Staticrevenge]

bump?

[Renee Nightwing]

Angel of Darkness
You take away the light
Surround it in Darkness
You do it just for me
My Angel of Darkness
You bring corruption, destruction and fear
Sometimes you make me scream
The shadows are where you dwell
But you still love me as well

Your dark wings lift my spirits high
And no matter where I hide
You always will me with you
You Dark Angel
My Angel, My black rose
You despise enemies who try to take me
You protect me with your dark magic
Yet no one knows about you

When I find you again
My Dark Angel
Take me with you
Into the black cloudless sky
Please teach me how to fly
But until then
I will wait until midnights end.

[Shiro_Melody-78]

We love each other,yet we pity such a thing.
We hold one another,yet we feel so cold.
We help one another,yet we regret it.
We understand others,but we don't understand ourselves.
But we all have something in common.
We have both darkness in the past....

but light ahead of us...
yet so small and shallow..
as if it were the only star in the sky.
And that light very small and beautiful..

...is you my hope.
No.Our hope.

[HaHaHarleen]

Could we enter more than one poem?

[Atty Wister]

"The Darkness Around Me"

There is darkness,
all around me,
you make it bright,
with your beautiful eyes,
you make me feel,
like a thousand stars,
though i am in darkness,
and i still love you,
i feel like im right next to you,
the darkness blinds me,
and hurts me too,
and IF i die,
we will go to heaven together,
and the darkness will never be.

[Atty Wister]

The Feeling Of love (poem) no copying

I feel that darkness is just a illusion,
and that pure souls,
will make the darkness seem to exist,
when you are around,
all i see is you,
your beautiful soul,
i love you,
and you love me,
and nothing will come between the feeling of love,
if me and you die,
we will climb the ladders,
through the light,
to heaven together.

[Fingerbang my Heart]

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