THE ORIGINAL rate your avatar!!!

[Clueless Kiya]

7/10

[Philose]

I've seen your avi before, and I just love it heart

10/10

[DeletedUser537]

Philose

I really love when people use the polar color scheme, it feels underappreciated. But, I feel as though the way you used it is kind of fractured. The pose is very good, but the outfit on the body being an entirely different color from the rest of it looks odd, especially because the hat doesn't match it either. I would also add some glasses to go with the pushing up glasses pose.
I think you need to decide which color scheme to go with, but I can suggest a few polar items that I think would go with this. Chic Style for Men, W's Sketchbook(good glasses), Pierce the Nebula, His Sorrow, Polar Bear March, Jack's Frigid Attitude, and maybe Ice Mage Karasu. Hunt around in the "polar," "ice," and "arctic" tags.
The color scheme the rest of the outfit has is usually tagged "Gambino," and things that match come up pretty easily with the search. Also try searching by "light blue," and "teal."
You have a pretty okay base going, but the lack of coordination and the incomplete pose makes it feel lacking. The wings and halo look out of place being so huge and ethereal compared to the rest of it, which the lack of color coordination emphasizes. I think you could make something out of this, but it just feels really disjointed right now so it's hard to guide you for. I can't tell if you're going for casual, angelic/ethereal, or what color scheme you're going for. 3.5/10.

@Rater - Could really use any suggestions, but specifically I'm iffy on the hair/head accessories and I could use some wings. Thank you!

[Rose Dust Rabbit]

deepstaria

@Rater - Could really use any suggestions, but specifically I'm iffy on the hair/head accessories and I could use some wings. Thank you!

7/10!

I am thinking maybe something with a little bit of red in to match the faces on the bats? Try maybe Pleasing Picnic Curls if you are looking for something big and poofy? Crimson Solar Mage? Alder Sideris? Incubust for horns maybe?

[Visforviolet]

Operation Juicebox

deepstaria

@Rater - Could really use any suggestions, but specifically I'm iffy on the hair/head accessories and I could use some wings. Thank you!

7/10!

I am thinking maybe something with a little bit of red in to match the faces on the bats? Try maybe Pleasing Picnic Curls if you are looking for something big and poofy? Crimson Solar Mage? Alder Sideris? Incubust for horns maybe?

I really love this one. Everything fits together nicely. I feel like a celestial background would suit you, or even some more stars, like Fallen Wish maybe?
I'll give it a 8.8/10

[xXSuperDaveXx]

8/10. Really nice, but could ue black near the bottom somehow.

[ikaboykun]

"Milord, milord! Waaait for meee!" cried out the deer.
(TBE)
"Milord, you look absolutely ready for battle!" The excited deer clapped his hands together. "Oooh, so ferocious. I feel like your eyes should be darting in a different direction though... Maybe try 'Standby Advocate'?"
He clapped again.
"Bravo, bravo, milord! I feel like you need a headpiece of sorts... Like a crown. Or the headpiece from the '____ Endgame' series!
A bit of thought later, Deer came up with this:
"An 8/10 for you, milord! A little tweaking and a background tossed in ought to do it!"

@rater

OOC:
Please help me find a good hair and vest item for this avi? Maybe even a muscle item? Thanks in advance!

[Azunaz]

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I don't know any vest items, which has stomach reveal in the middle. But if you want muscle items for stomach, Trestle lurker, accidentaly archer, ___ reputation etc.

Instead you could go for a tank top like green camo renegade's A-shirt, and add an arm mod which add muscles, example could be Trainyard brawler. But if you are going for a military look, that probably ain't beneficial, since you might want a gun for arms instead.

[MangaAquarium]

tbe
Hmmmm- I like the marks on her hands but if only they were in a different position, like on the lap or something! Does that arm mod happen to have any hidden poses? Also, to go with the arms, I think you need more white on the face, if you don't change the color of the arms.
Have you tried any of the Godinas for hair? I feel like it should be longer. Aaaand the eyes should be creepier, I think; like those holes that I saw you with last time you had this avatar on?
EDIT: OH NO I FORGOT TO GIVE YOU A NUMBER so sorry I'm simultaneously doing homework lol
8.5/10

@rater, clutter intended and more than a number! :3

[xocalliope]

MangaAquarium

tbe! :3

9.5/10! I love this one! <3

I'm really only taking 0.5 off because I don't think any avatar's completely perfect. X'D
I don't know if I've ever seen an avatar that looks more aquatic. :9 The reason I love what you've done so much is because I think you really grasped how the ocean works in real life! Your avatar is beautifully jumbled to show a realistic clutter of aquatic life. The scene you've captured seems very lively and natural. Furthermore, because you've included so much in your avvie I'm never really bored of it-- everywhere I look I see another colour and another organism. I feel like I'm scuba diving. :3 Also I noticed that there's an organization to the clutter. When I look carefully, there are a couple of motifs and colours that you repeat, which just goes to show how much work you put into piecing everything together. Well done! heart

@rater: gettin ma halloween on because I have no life and september to me means halloween prep :'D

[SinfulGuillotine]

I think you've got some really good stuff going on here. It's refreshingly original and unique for a Halloween-themed avatar. I don't think I've ever seen anything quite like it. I love how the two ghosts fit perfectly into the bone heart. I don't love the skull on her head. At least not with the skull mask. There's just not enough contrast between the two skulls, so they sort of blend into each other, which creates kind of a strange look. I'd use either the mask or the skull on her head, but not both. I'm also having a bit of trouble figuring out what's going on with her hands. Part of that might be because of the beak on the head skull; it's hard to tell where the beak ends and her hand/arm begins, and I feel like the beak may be obscuring one of her hands a little bit. It also looks a little strange that one of her arms is black and the other is skin-coloured. I'd recommend using a different arm mod. Perhaps the arm mod from Charismatic Dealer would work? That's a good arm mod with black gloves. I also think you could probably find a leg mod that works better. I like how it looks like she's sitting in the heart, but the way her knees are drawn up to her chest looks a little awkward. Perhaps try swapping out for the leg mod from In Silence I Kill or Dark Fairy Lumi. Those would both still have her sitting in the heart, but I think the posing of those would look a lot less awkward. Lastly, I think layering a full background behind the heart would be a good finishing touch. Go for something simple, ideally in dark colours to provide contrast. Perhaps the background from Venator's Dark Vigil? All in all, I really like this, and I think with a few edits, it will be a really awesome Halloween avatar. Rated 7/10.

@Rater: Very much a work in progress. Trying to decide whether or not to scrap the idea all together. I can't decide if the mask looks creepy or just stupid. Any and all feedback is much appreciated. More than just a number, please!

[Akira Hayashi]

tbe i have a slight soft spot for the mask because of a friend, but i think the strangest thing i have to say is: i recommend a little more blood, particularly in the lower left corner (in accordance to the position it is in at the moment)7. 8/10

@rater: any eye suggestions? i don't know if there's a similar pair without the glasses... sweatdrop

[xocalliope]

Akira Hayashi

tbe!

I'm going to go with 7/10 on this one lovely!

I love the background you used and the concept you were going for-- a wedding in autumn sort of vibe? :3 The hair also looks gorgeous and blends in seamlessly with the background.

However, I must say, perhaps I'm seeing it wrong, but the colours in the foreground (worn on your avatar) seem to be mismatched with what's behind you. The colours behind you are mostly dull oranges, yellows, browns, tans, and sands, while you happen to be wearing more fiery and bright shades of orange and more dark shades of brown. I don't mind the brightness of the oranges-- it draws the viewer's attention in and makes them pay more attention to your avatar. The dark browns, however, stand out a tad too much for my liking. They're not quite brown enough and in fact, they're so dark that they're almost black. This sort of clashes with the relative dullness and peacefulness of your background. Furthermore, what I would also say is that the white of her dress is also a little bit strange when you're looking at the whole picture. What you have your avatar wearing is a grey (and therefore cool) toned white. Compared to the rest of the avatar, which has primarily warm-toned colours, the white truly does stick out and clash.

Unfortunately I'm not too confident in my suggestion as I'm unable to try it on your avatar and see how it looks, but Cerynitian's Blessing's pose "Golden Eyes" happens to be without glasses and a golden orange colour. I'm not sure if it'll work with what you have, once again, but hopefully you can give it a try and see if you like it? Another idea is perhaps Bright and Benevolent Eyes in "Pumpkin Spice"? "Pumpkin Spice" paired with maybe a Lovely Lucie's "Flirty Eyes" would really add a serenity to your piece!

tl;dr: colours in foreground clash a tad too much with colours in background-- watch out for colour tone cohesiveness. Try Cerynitian's Blessing "Golden Eyes" or Bright and Benevolent Eyes "Pumpkin Spice" (with or without Lovely Lucie "Flirty Eyes" ) for orange eye options without glasses! heart

Sorry if I'm not particularly helpful. I honestly don't really know my way around items as much as other ATers do. ;w;

[Tsuki no Inaba]

10/10 gosh your avi is pretty! I want that outfit. OwO

@rater: Dragon Trainer Tsuki no Inaba is ready to battle.

[sitonai]

TBE

8/10
I like the idea! I feel like there may be too much going on though?
All the dragon's + the background makes it look a bit cluttered.

Edit: I also feel like there should be more gold accents because of the hat.