Launch My Avatar Line: Revamp III - Not Open (Yet)

Season III?

Yes.	100.0%	[ 2 ]
Total Votes:			[ 2 ]

[edgar sawtelle]

crying

[Teh Knightmare]

I just can't be with you
Stop calling, stop calling
Walk, walk, fashion baby

It was advice. xD

[edgar sawtelle]

Haha. I know.
I'll stick with urban then. I wouldn't want my chances to be hurt and besides, now that I think about it, I was changing urban just to be safe.

[Teh Knightmare]

I just can't be with you
Stop calling, stop calling
Walk, walk, fashion baby

Another major problem I'm seeing with line descriptions are people using words that mean almost the same thing. The judges will note this and this will hurt you EVERY ROUND for lack of originality. So re-look at your words. Could one be absorbed in another? If you see it, the judges do too.

[Jamais Changeant]

Does my line sound too vague or repetitive?

[poojuice]

Jamais Changeant

Does my line sound too vague or repetitive?

I think Eclectic and Character are okay, but Daring seems vague.
Like, daring in what way?

[Karmic Kelsie]

ℓїκε ħůηġяу ġůεşτş, α şїττїηġ αůdїεηcε ℓøøκş...

>: Can I change feminine to education?
And classy to upper class? I mean, I think that's more along the lines of what I was thinking,
and a little more defined, perhaps.

...ρℓαуş αяε ℓїκε şůρρεяş; ρøετş αяε τħε cøøκş

[Jamais Changeant]

poojuice

Jamais Changeant

Does my line sound too vague or repetitive?

I think Eclectic and Character are okay, but Daring seems vague.
Like, daring in what way?

Different ways depending on the round. I think the other risk in describing your line is narrowing your focus TOO much. I'm mostly worried about eclectic...

[poojuice]

I see what you mean. xD
Still, I don't really get a mental picture of what you want to do when I read the word "daring", though.

I'm really reconsidering my words.
I'm not sure I can pull off "trendy" every avatar. D:

[kk fasho]

oo this filled up fast.

[mummersfarce]

-trade sent-
I am looking forward to this. ;D

[poojuice]

I love your current, kk. <3

[kk fasho]

Thanks! n_n
yours is pretty bitchin' too <3

[poojuice]

Thanks!

What's that frilly blue skirt you're wearing, though?
I don't think I've seen it before.

[kk fasho]

it's the blue rose kimono.
The blacklace jacket makes it look like a skirt ^.^