Launch My Avatar Line: Revamp III - Not Open (Yet)

Season III?

Yes.	100.0%	[ 2 ]
Total Votes:			[ 2 ]

[Karmic Kelsie]

ℓїκε ħůηġяу ġůεşτş, α şїττїηġ αůdїεηcε ℓøøκş...

Miss Educated :: Upper Class, Cute, Education
New WIP, New (Edit: New again) Banner.

I'm worried this banner doesn't actually go with the avatar. e______e

kk :: I don't get sophisticated very much. I get more like... urban chic or something? Idk. The head item looks weird & tacked on.
King :: Actually, that's more urban than the last I think. I like how the legs look mechanical almost.
April :: I like your banner. c:
Bara :: I like the pink. I think the orange is the thing messing up your flow most.
obv :: I can't really see the masquerade. I agree about ditching the mask.
kasch :: Less blood is duller, but not as dead. :c So I don't know really.
mar :: I like the third best.
zebra :: I think it's pretty. c:

...ρℓαуş αяε ℓїκε şůρρεяş; ρøετş αяε τħε cøøκş

[`April]

hehe<3
I forgot to put my name on my logo. oops xD

@zebra:
seeing as this is supposed to encompass your whole line, you want something that will really stand out.
maybe create an interesting shape with larger items?

@kelsie:
your avatar looks like an adorable nerd
but the banner screams private school prep
and I recognize that book cover xDD

[Karmic Kelsie]

`April

@kelsie:
your avatar looks like an adorable nerd
but the banner screams private school prep
and I recognize that book cover xDD

ℓїκε ħůηġяу ġůεşτş, α şїττїηġ αůdїεηcε ℓøøκş...

Is it a good series? I haven't actually read any of them.

...ρℓαуş αяε ℓїκε şůρρεяş; ρøετş αяε τħε cøøκş

[`April]

I haven't read it, but I just recognized the book cover from browsing the library so often xD
You should read the brief summary featured on the back for a better idea of what it's about.

[kk fasho]

New WIP


& gimme a minute
I'll give some feedback c:

[Ratt Scabies]

Teh Knightmare

Judges may NOT give feedback.

Sorry to quote the first page, but
I DON'T REMEMBER THIS. gonk

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[Teh Knightmare]

I just can't be with you
Stop calling, stop calling
Walk, walk, fashion baby

What do you mean?

[Bara no Chikai]

@even snakes have hearts: When I think of sci-fi, I think Star Wars, Star Trek, Starcraft... a lot of "Stars"... But I suppose it looks like sci-fi in the crazy anime world. However, sci-fi IS fantasy because fiction = fantasy.

@Karmic Kelsie: I was trying to hide the blue of the wig and the green-blue of the Anima at the same time using the Noel's Gift (orange wing thingy).
I like your banner actually. I don't believe that the banner HAS to be exactly the same as your entry. Just the basic style of it.
Your entry is rather bulky though, even without the tesla coil. I guess the triangular shape of the person matches the triangular shape of the tesla coil, lol.




Neatened up a bit.

OR


I could go for my usual red avis. But idk. Red looks like playing too safe--for me anyways; I tend to use red a lot.

[even snakes have hearts]

True, but if it were supposed to be sci-fi then why not just SAY sci-fi? when I think of fantasy I think of dragons and elves and unicorns and magic and s**t. like an RPG, which is what you were going for, yes? and I love that.

i like the pinkish one better. the torso is better but the feet got worse imo.

@kk; ew ew ew ew ew ew nooooooooo. no.

@kels; the banner doesn't go at all. the avatar is still chunky and strange. it needs color at the feet.

[obviously obvious]

finished my banner. it doesn't go with my tektek.

[`April]

@kelsie:
the new banner is better
probably slim down the torso/middle in general of the avatar
and more color at the feet

@kk:
she looks bland/emotionless
btw, I loved your work in Little Monsters!

@bara:
I agree with even snakes have hearts about the feet
a bit clunky with awkward layering

[S W l F T Y]

bara I love the red one. but the browns could use some work

[`April]

@obvious:
what's the name of your line?

[Bara no Chikai]

I'm not going for sci-fi... yet. D:
Actually, I agree with the feet. XD I got frustrated at them and decided to stop for a while before I make it worse. I'll work on it again later.

[VegetasBabie]

Any thoughts?



Detailed, thematic, techy~
It's based on the Nano-C legs. :3

(edited to add a second tektek)