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just made this

a rate plx

Tiny Muse

Relena Peace
Kumi Kasahara
Relena Peace
Kumi Kasahara
Relena Peace


You. Are. Awesome. I love the improvements you made!!! I just need to save up a little for different bangs and some other stuff but it's perfect!! THANK YOU FOR HELPING ME.



I'm glad my suggestions could help! o uo
I really couldn't think of any other ivory bangs, it sucks that they got that expensive. x -x;

So many things have been going up and I'm just like....noooo. The only item I was pleased about was the chobits hair that went down in price.

OH AND...I WANTED TO TRY ANOTHER. What do you think? Suggestions?


Yeah~ that's been happening a lot. e -e I went to check an item I used to stalk that was ~90b and now it's 430b. Soooooo yeah, I'll be waiting till it goes down. o ue
The chobits hair is pretty nice. o: I'll have to keep watching for it to go back down to it's average listing. p:

That's one fancy avatar you've got there. * -*
The colors you used come together really nicely~
The only suggestion I can think of is maybe switching out the fox for the original ivory one to balance out the sleeves.
Awesome job. o uo


I was just trying out your suggestion before and as always you were right. It's a lot better with the ivory fox. I'm now trying to do something that works with the ghastly mood bubble and the background I have here. I don't know. I feel lost because I really could find anything great with the pinks that are in the background. I know the hair should probably go unless I get a black hat. Help?
xd

By the way, your current avatar reminds me of some old move with a crystal... It was one that used puppets. Do you know which one I'm talking about? I LOVE IT.


I like the facial expression~
The combination of the ghastly and the background is a good idea. ;o
Last Year's Lookbook has a really good offblack hat that could work. c:
The earrings from Chaos Groove seem kinda weird. Maybe remove them?
There's a lot of blue at the neck area. Try to break that up a bit with Reverse Inverse's collar.
The bottom of the avatar seems devoid of blue. Try adding Electric Popstar Leggings or Memphis' Stockings to bring down the blue.
To carry down the white from the hair, try adding Astra: Pale Fluttering Back Bow. o:

Here's the avatar with these suggestions:
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Thank you! o uo The dark crystal! I really liked that movie. xD I finally broke down and bought REI based off of the movie (The Crimson Quartz).
The giant background background crystal is more useful than I thought it'd been. x3

Tiny Muse

xPuerile
hi there, i was wondering if you could give me a rate, and some feedback on the one i'm using, as well as
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i really have no idea what to do with it


8 // 1o
Interesting theme. I like that it looks like your's gonna eat the floaty balls. x3 (my astras are off so I hope I see it correctly o -o)
The black effect over the avatar is throwing me off a bit. xD;; (though it is hiding the use of black arms instead of offblack ones.)
Too bad there isn't a We Hunger item with offblack sleeves and a ivory work. It'd make your avatar awesome. o:
Some more black at the head would be nice. Try switching to Best Summer Love's horns instead.
Reverse Inverse's earrings would layer over Hero's Journey's earrings and add detail to the head.
Daughter of Fury's face paint could cover up the bare forehead.
The Hey Mama tattoo could add some detail to the stomach.



For the second one I took a swing at adding some stuff to it.
I'm not sure what direction you were heading in for it since it's pretty bare. x:
I wasn't sure what the hat, heart and shirt you had on so I went with the base of the other remaining items. xD;


This is what I came up with: (It's kinda a fluffy punk xD)
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A nose is always a plus so I'd suggest adding a Mimi Neko nose.
To add more detail to the face try adding Lamenting Lucie makeup for blush, Lovely Genie Silver Nose Ring and Masquerade's mole (if you have one, it went up in price . _.).
Hardhearted Spirit 's bangs paired with Moira's Pink Rebellion's extensions on the protagonist hair looks cute and balances the other colors.
Reverse Inverse earrings paired with the Onyx Kira Kira Earring create a nice detail to the head.
Saccharine Sugarflake's dress layers under the seven kisses skirt and adds to the fluff.
Pink Cat Breath's legs have a better balance of color than the Moira ones.
Qi Luola's scarf carries the fluff of the skirt up.
Last Year's Lookbook has a good pair of arms.

Tiny Muse

Artificial Imagination
I'd love a rate, if you've the time and inclination.


9.5 // 1o
I really like the movement of the avatar and the facial expression. The blue eyes are a nice touch. o uo
How would Reverse Inverse's earrings look?
Since the 'neck' does show a bit, maybe try adding a shadow to the chest?
Idk how Briar Rose's undergarments layer on male bases but that's one possibility for shadow. Lewd Reputation is another option.

Tiny Muse

Rose of a Vampire
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Thank you! > 3<

Eloquent Perfectionist

Kumi Kasahara


Wasn't sure what you meant by 'chest shadow' so I went to poke at it. Briar Rose did nothing, but Lewd Reputation definitely helped. Tiny change; big difference. Thanks!

Tiny Muse

DarkxNeko
Please help make this avatar better.
; o;


I'm not very good at avatars without much clothing on. x -x;;
I'm also not a fan of wearing two poses from the same item but I can't think of a replacement. s:
Try to balance out the colors a bit more. o:

I would say add a nose but sadly the face mod is too low and it would look weird. x -x
Slash Blush's lavender pose acts as a blush a and eyeshadow with that face mod so it would add some detail.
Switch over to a darker Punshing item, such as Punishing Gula, to carry the black throughout the avatar.
June Birthstone Streaks would be a good method to bring some black to the head without messing with the avalon flowers.
Cold Desires' abs with tattoo pose or Get Buff's sweaty body pose would add some detail the stomach
Try switching over to a skin tone leg mod like the arms. Spirited Legs are a nice option.
Lethe Rose's train could add some black to the feet if your do switch leg mods.

Here's the avatar with these suggestions:
(I used SDPlus #538 Chauntelle as a skintone so I wouldn't have to change my base if you were curios why there are horns and the skin color is off. XD)
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Tiny Muse

Artificial Imagination
Kumi Kasahara


Wasn't sure what you meant by 'chest shadow' so I went to poke at it. Briar Rose did nothing, but Lewd Reputation definitely helped. Tiny change; big difference. Thanks!



Yeahhh, I need to check what the briar rose items look like on male bases later to know if I should even mention it or not. xD
I'm glad my suggestion could help! o uo

Tiny Muse

Rossie Harlow
Rate me~


7 // 1o
The base of the avatar is nice but it feels like it's lacking small detail.
Try adding a nose to fill in the face. Either the Mimi Neko nose or Commander nose would be good options.
Boorish Boar or Fiery Accidentally Archer ears would add some detail to the head.
Memories of You or Devil's Fiendish Kitchen could be possible tails to add.
My Seductive Valentine's legs would bring red to the bottom of the avatar.
Maybe try Cherry Godina's eye shadow instead with black eyes to balance.
Lamenting Lucie's makeup would add some more blush to the face.
The Hey Mama tattoo would darken the side of the top.
Black Star Arm Tattoo could add some detail the arm.
Chain Link Belt could add some detailing to the waist.
A's Sketchbook's bangs could add to the hair.

Avatar with these suggestions:
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Tiny Muse

PYURIA
just made this

a rate plx


8.5 // 1o
I like the shape and color choice~
The detailing on the head and bottom of the avatar is nice but the mask thingy comes across as flat.
If something small and white layered on top or just below the mask thingy it'd help tie it in more.

Lavish Disser


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          everyone Really liked these two iirc

          also a rate on my current would be nice,,
I would really like a rate. ♥

We Are Robyn's Senpai

Big Baby

In love with your avatars! You really have a solid style going, and I like it a lot.
I've had this avatar for a couple years, and he's starting to look a bit bland to me, do you have any tips on how I could spice him up?

Tiny Muse

fugue states

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          everyone Really liked these two iirc

          also a rate on my current would be nice,,


Neat concepts. o:

7 // 1o
I like the expression of the eyes.
A nose and a mouth would be nice additions.
The colorful bandages seem a little odd. Maybe replace them with a more mellow colors?
Sweetheart Schoolboy plus Princess Less Than Three clips could remove the part of the hair next to the scarf. o:

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