OOC2 - Awards on P799! CG Colter, Devaena, Anton and Lurp!

Would you say your character is amazing, fabulous or just plain incredible?

All of the above.	100.0%	[ 251 ]
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[_striped__wolf_]

RADI0 Mouse

Thanks~
Well, she's okay with it because she thinks she'll find her brother.

I think we can...I donno

[_striped__wolf_]

Lori Annalynn

Lita heself is relatively harmless, except for the guns... Demon on the other hand is onyl out for himself and sometimes Lita because he has grown fond of her.

Levi was 16 when he left home in search of a life that wasn't like the slums, he found it in painting and the arts. He married a woman and they now do a art theme called, "Ink and painter."
He never told his parents so they never knew.

Her parents turned to drugs after they lost their children and were murdered, why is still under investigation.

The demons just steal peoples bodies. People can't turn to demons, but if a demon does take your body you have to share, or get your soul eaten. and that is painful. The demons existed for along time but only recently did humans recognize it. They tried to manipulate the demons to do their will but obviously it didn't work well.

[RADI0 Mouse]

-- on the radio --


> Wolf
Ha ha, it's good she's got that outlook, then. She's got a reliable driver.

I'm gonna warn you now that I may come across harsh on my critique - I tend to be honest, so please don't take what I say personally or take offense to it.

There are a few grammatical errors in there, but none that are too confusing.
One that I noticed is "...Demon who's vessel was growing..." - this isn't correct. You mean whose - which is the right form of who+possessive.

There's also a few typos - like "teacher her" instead of "teach her".

You could also afford to space out your entry more, to make it a bit more readable or to catch the eye a bit easier.

But that being said, I think you've caught Demon pretty well - his reluctant caring about Lita really comes through and makes 'em both look just unbearably cute!

I hope I can read more of them in the future~! >w<

[_striped__wolf_]

RADI0 Mouse

As much as I don't want to admit it, that is why I need to go back to school, I never remember to use correct grammar during the summer! ><
Thank you very much for the critique, and I don't think you are harsh, I just think you're right! haha, I was rushing so I could finish by the deadline, I only found out about this contest a few days ago.

[RADI0 Mouse]

-- on the radio --


Ha ha, grammar's a habit, I'll tell you that. XD

Oh, I know what you mean! XD
Have you had any success on your art request?

Also, if you wanted to casual RP Lita and Demon's entrance into Serendipity, I could get Amelia to tag along, too! >w<

[Luna_et_Noctis]

Lori Annalynn

Luna_et_Noctis

Thank you very much! (And you're welcome; I'm glad you did join!) And congratulations to you, too! (First time RPing, and you're already a manager, eh? But I think you'll do a great job!)

Would you like the compiled document I'm making? Or would you like me to post it in the RP thread? Or do you not care one way or the other who keeps the records? Or do you have any suggestions on how to do it? (I don't really want to post it in the RP thread before Kimaya gets the other one up, in case she needs more than one post to fit it...) confused

I would love to have your document; I compiled what's happened so far in the Marketplace RP last night, but I would love to double-check it against someone else's compilation as I'm sure I missed stuff. Yes, you're right, I didn't want to mess anything up for Kimaya's thread, so I made a separate one in the guild. Speaking of which....

[Luna_et_Noctis]

Hello again everyone! For easy reference, I am compiling the Marketplace masquerade into its own thread, so you don't have to go through 10 billion pages to see what is happening in the RP. It's pretty free-form, so feel free to jump right in! Also, I thought up a wee bit more about the masquerade event that is going on, so I encourage even those who are up to speed with the rp to check it out!


Marketplace Masquerade Archive

Oh, one small rule- please don't post in the Archive, post here!

[Riftwing]

Care to affiliate? Your link is up on my site :3

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[Lori Annalynn]

C e r u l e a n

Exactly! It's nice to see other people know what I mean. My sister tried to give one of her clans the power to communicate telepathically with each other and when I said why, she said, "Because they can!" My expression was basically: rolleyes , lol. But, regrading your theory, I would think that they can-that or find loop holes. biggrin

What do you mean by 'Althalus moment?'

Actually, was quite surprised he didn't have a supportive father either. And now that you mention he is a middle child, wow, coincidence or fate XD? I actually debated for a while whether or not she should be a middle or youngest child. In the end, I figured that being a middle would work better. And no, her siblings are pretty much like they're dad. They're quite proud that their father thinks highly of them and can rely on them, unlike Ella. They often make fun of her for that. Which is why she has terrible social skills.

blaugh That would be my reaction, too! I guess it's because I like to learn about the history, culture, and even philosophy of people and places—I like learning about the world itself as much as the characters. And when you do things just because you "can," or because you "want to" at the time, it doesn't create a consistent, solidified world. And that can sometimes cause problems when you change your mind or want to incorporate something else.

The Redemption of Althalus, by David and Leigh Eddings. Good book! ^_^ (<— chock full of spoiler link, if you read anything past the first section or so)

Yeah, Reed's "father" hated him, flat out. Not just his personality, but his very existence. Reed had no clue when he was really young, but he discovered it (in very painful ways) when he got a little older—and so he decided to do all he could to rebel, basically. Rough times for him. But his siblings didn't really make fun of him—his older sister pretty much ignored him, and his younger brother actually looked up to him (though, Reed tried not to get too close to his younger brother, to avoid ruining his reputation). And because of all of that, Reed has terrible social skills, too! ^_^ Luckily, he's with his real father now (who isn't abusive at all)—and working on believing in himself and learning how to make friends. It's a challenge, sometimes, but I think he'll do all right. I think he worries about hurting people a lot more than he actually does.

But he really doesn't like to see people in any sort of situation like the one he experienced. Which is why he has a habit of butting into people's business: when he sees someone being hurt (physically or, perhaps even worse, emotionally), he has to do something about it. (Incidentally, he wouldn't much like Ella's father. stare And he'd sympathize a lot with Ella. Heh—he loves to read, too! ^_^)

[_striped__wolf_]

RADI0 Mouse

A habit I have not yet required. -sigh-

Actually I have, three people have draw Lita but no one wants to take the challenge of drawing Demon.

I'm tempted, but I am not 100% sure yet to how they will react to serendipity.

If you want to start it, I will follow. ^-^

[Luna_et_Noctis]

Blade Kuroda

If anything, Shun supposed it was a good sign he was somewhere where he could understand the language. That didn't provide a great deal of relief to him, however. Looking over the masked woman that had approached him a little warily, his gaze flicked over towards the one she motioned to. The masks seemed nice and all, but he wasn't exactly here to buy anything.

Not that he really knew why he was there in the first place.

"I'm not interested," he said plainly.

Though, with the amount of masked people going around, he had to wonder if there was some sort of festival happening at the moment. Either that, or that was just the fashion of the place, he supposed.

The woman did not pressure him, her shoulders slightly rising to show her relent. "I won't press you, sir. If you change your mind though," she gracefully motioned behind her, "you know where I am."

She continued to direct the attention of the crowd towards Meilin and his wares with slow but deliberate grace. The way she moved was slightly strange, almost unnerving, if watched for too long. A careful observer would note that her head and neck moved very little, if at all. However, the slow, constant motion of her arms disguised it, to a point, from the average party-goer.

[Blade Kuroda]

In the very least, Shun was glad that the woman didn't try to pressure him towards the booth selling the masks. Dealing with a persistent salesman was not something he really wanted to do right now. However, he did not walk off just yet, as he figured the masked woman might be able to provide a little more information on his whereabouts. Her movements were rather odd, which was something he picked up as he watched her move and direct people towards the booth.

"There is one thing, though, you may be able to help me with," he said quietly while staring at her, "I would appreciate it if you could give me the location of this place."

If he had a name, he could find out more. It would be more ideal if he knew of the place, but the chances of that were rather slim.

[C e r u l e a n]

Lori Annalynn

Hm, interesting book. Think I'll read it one day.

Like, you, I'm really interested in learning more about people and other cultures, their history, their religions, etc. World building can be a lot of fun if those kinds of things are interesting to you. Hey, you know, since you like asking those questions, do you mind if I sometimes PM you with some world or culture concepts ask for a fresh eye to look over?

It sounds like you got a good level head on Reed, which was rather impressive. Healing from abuse and trauma isn't easy, and may never be entire overcome. However, it's how one learns to live with it that really makes a lot of difference. Unfortunately, my Ella only really wants her father to look at her like he does her siblings so, she still has a lot to learn, even after twenty-one years, and really doesn't care for much else. She's never had much friends, if at all, and as such, she doesn't feel to need them around. However, I think she would be intrigued to find out why his father hated him so much.

[Luna_et_Noctis]

Blade Kuroda

In the very least, Shun was glad that the woman didn't try to pressure him towards the booth selling the masks. Dealing with a persistent salesman was not something he really wanted to do right now. However, he did not walk off just yet, as he figured the masked woman might be able to provide a little more information on his whereabouts. Her movements were rather odd, which was something he picked up as he watched her move and direct people towards the booth.

"There is one thing, though, you may be able to help me with," he said quietly while staring at her, "I would appreciate it if you could give me the location of this place."

If he had a name, he could find out more. It would be more ideal if he knew of the place, but the chances of that were rather slim.

Beneath her mask, Lamia winced. "Ooohhh... I see. You have just arrived..." Carefully turning to make certain Meilin was still surrounded by customers, she removed her sash from her satchel, and slid the mask off of her face. Shaking her head to smooth her hair, she smiled at the man.

While she had only been in the city for several days, she had managed to get a general idea of where she was, or, at least where she was not.

"This place's name is the Fortress Cerxes, I believe. From what I have gathered, this place is an alternate dimension that sometimes people fall into," she responded. "Have you seen that we are on a floating island yet?"

[Kiddo Seanchain]

Ngh... I wish I could join in. But I'm leaving for Pennsic this Friday and need to pack and finish up my crossbow bolts and my dress. I'm going to be extremely busy this week and then gone all next week. But do I ever want to join in. Maybe when I get back.