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@F-T: Uhmm, there's something about Iuri's ear placement that isn't quite working still. Maybe adding a small touch of sideburn would help? You could potentially darken under his eyes a bit, too, giving them a bit more of that tired, puffy, circles-under-the-eyes look. I'd consider making Ylaine's palm bigger, just pulling the bottom down a bit. It would help balance the size of her hand against her forearm. :3
There were the concerns about the house in the background of the piece with Black and Merroth, maybe going with more of an old wood house look and not having a large glass window (which isn't technologically feasible for Generys and Edward John's time period). Also Generys's dress maybe being a touch too nice-looking, and the pinkness of the costume elements on her and Ed John. I don't know if it's feasible to look into those things at this point, time-wise. Obviously none of these things are really major points. :3
actually I remember some of those comments from last time, and when I saw
this old WIP and wondered whatever happened to gen's dress I used there, was there something off about that one as well? I'm trying to remember xD and sure I can try to squeeze in those changes as best I can!
EDIT: ohh man! I can't believe I forgot all this stuff I actually redrew the house for the background and went on hiatus,
here it was all done without refs, only inspiration but i never coloured it xD talk about a waste had I never thought to re-ask about this xD if you think it looks ok I'm going to just colour it quick and chuck it on if it looks alright to you
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