xAyumiiChan
Heeyo!
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First art contest so sorry if I'm a bit of a noob, and I'm still adjusting to my tablet *used to using a pencil* ;^;
So um, here is WIP of a quick sketch I did this morning! ^_^ Any suggestions, advice or anything is appreciated mucho
Jelly
I really like Misoki's character design, she's so cuuute so I paired her alongside Tuthau and Iuri :3
Eee, this is looking good! Definitely a good group to draw. You've got a nice level of detail already, that's definitely going to play in your favor!
Character-wise, I'd suggest making Misoki more flat-chested. Iuri's mage wrappings go all the way to his fingers. (: His hair also parts on the other side, which can be a bit tricky to draw, but it might be worth taking on the challenge! ^^
Iuri's ear should be a bit higher up I think. Good rule of thumb for ears is the tip hits the line of the eyes and the bottom is about at the bottom of the nose. It varies a bit depending on the individual of course, but still! Handy tip. ^^
[ex] I think Iuri's hand is a bit of a weak point. It's a little bit on the big side, and the fingers feel a bit uneven. I know hands can be hard. The biggest thing I'd recommend looking at is where the lines for the fingers start. The pinky finger line looks like it's starting up quite a bit higher than the other fingers. I think if you started the lines for the other fingers up higher (more in line with the pinky) it'd take care of the issues nicely!
I'd also suggest bringing the upper left side of Iuri's robes in, more of a straighter line would be more mascline, and maybe bringing his sash up a bit. Also, with his sleeve, it looks a bit billowy and with the arm bent like that, you could probably get some mileage off of having the lower part of his sleeve hang a little bit more from the arm.
[ex] On Tuthau, the seam of the shirt sleeve that runs from the armpit to the tip of the shoulder (where the epaulet ends) would be a good thing to add. Misoki's mouth is sitting a little low, so maybe move that up a bit. (: Also, hands being hard, I realize Misoki's feet are like hands. XD;;
Overall, I'm really loving what you've got so far and I think this'll be an awesome entry! If you need any more feedback, I'll try to prioritize it and get back to your quickly since you might be wanting to get this one in before the end of the month. ^^ Do you know what you're thinking of doing for the background yet?
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