Alright This is a prototype opening for a story i have been working on. Please when commenting on this be Serious...That means you too John!
He looked down from atop the hill on which he stood at the desolate remains of the city. Buildings slowly crumbled, the rain only making it worse. The fires that once raged now gone, leaving the rubble charred. Lightning Streaked across the sky, illuminating it and casting shadows across the destroyed town.
He felt something rub up against his shoulder. He turned his head to see his most precious friend leaning on his shoulder. Oddly enough she was smiling up at him. Her beautiful grey eyes were filled with tears as she nudged his shoulder with her forehead and pointed . He looked in the direction that she was pointing and saw people slowly trickling into the village, one by one. He heard foot steps and turned to see his other two remaining friends walking towards him.they exchanged quick nods and turned to walk up to the peak of the hill. They saw the graves of their four fallen friends, freshley buried. They each placed a flower on the graves and looked up at the sky...
 Llywellyn Strauss · Mon Sep 11, 2006 @ 10:38pm · 3 Comments |
