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Darker poem
Darkness creeps up so close to me tonight
Its knocking heavily at my door wanting to come in
Despair slips in secretly blinding my sight
Deaths face appear before my eyes with its secretive grin

Red welts formed across my arm
For the blade that touched it was dull
The slices weren't deep enough to cause me any harm
But the unrelentingly pain was fresh and full

The grimacing face of my heart awkwardly beats
Corrupting my mind as I sat there to think
Only a little bit more time before my blood shall be spilt upon these sheets
And a red stream that will cover my body,flowing in spiral down into the sink

Don't let your tears fall down your eyes when you hear this news
For this was the only thing that was waiting for me
Its already too late to save me from this, for i have nothing to lose
This wound I've inflicted upon myself will set all my precious blood free

My black heart has finally revealed itself at its end
As the last few second I smiled as i knew i would make everyone cry
And the love that those who I've loved sent to me will never mend
For today...was the day...the day that I die






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Angelic_Kay_Demonic
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commentCommented on: Fri Sep 11, 2009 @ 12:49am
O.O Did Yu Write This After Me And Yu Talked >.< Sound So Much Like Our Convo.


commentCommented on: Sun Sep 13, 2009 @ 02:12pm
o.o



XxoMandieoxX
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Reverse Pandemonium
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commentCommented on: Mon Sep 21, 2009 @ 07:33pm
if this a a figurative poem I will judge it as such and here it is: Kinda off honestly, the whole feel of the poem sounds like an awkward gate through the words "Its already too late to save me from this, for i have nothing to lose
This wound I've inflicted upon myself will set all my precious blood free"
This sounds off since if you had nothing to lose why then is your blood preciouse? If it is not figurative then I will say this with all sincerity: I will hurt you and the only thing you will see is my face before the grave dirt hits yours *_*


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