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Yep. First poem I'm going to post ^^ eh, I'm still iffy on the title. can't seem to find a good one.. >.< If you have any suggestions, well go ahead and post ^^
I wrote this in English class, 9th grade for a warm up. Am quite proud if it ^^ Of course, I do think it needs a little tinkering here an there.
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Traveling alone through darkness,
Without percieving time,
Wandering, walking and walking,
Deeper and deeper,
Your senses grow curious,
Curiouser and curiouser.
You see the light at the end of the tunnel,
A faint, glowing, orange light,
You walk faster, faster
Wishing for someone to share this with,
Except, not a single being is beside you,
Not a single soul breathes in this dark, dark tunnel...
A tunnel through time,
Untill, finally, you arrive at the end,
You collapse and fall
Into sweet sweet eternal sleep
Exausted.
Written by: Crimson_Pegasus
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^^ there. Basically, I think describing someone who has lived a life of darkness and loneliness.
Feedback? =D would appreciate it.
 Lady Meiku Noire · Tue Aug 26, 2008 @ 05:16pm · 2 Comments |
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