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Reply 44: Stairway to Poetry
Pieces of My Soul

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Viese Servatika

PostPosted: Mon May 21, 2007 6:18 am
Pieces of My Soul
Written: 14 May 2007

Clenched hands, erratic heart, overflowing tears
The image in the mirror doesn't want to go away
Break the glass, look at the different dimensions of my soul
Sad, Happy, Lonely, Mad
Pieces of me in that broken glass
That I can never seem to put together anymore
The blood from these swollen fists can't put it together
Sorry, I can't seem to put it together like you do
So beat me, kick me while I'm down
It's not like these tears will stop falling
It's not like it would matter anymore
I'm already broken, if you didn't realize
I'm already dead in the inside.
Swirls of melancholy continue to torture my aching heart
There's no point in happiness
I don't want to be happy anymore
So that I wouldn't be so high up
Before I begin crashing back down again
Having to piece again my shattered soul
Because of you  
PostPosted: Mon May 21, 2007 3:51 pm
My god! I usually love the rhyming ones, but this one is an exception without question!! 10/10!! Love it! Love it!
 

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Viese Servatika

PostPosted: Tue May 22, 2007 3:43 am
Thank you. That is quite a compliment. redface  
PostPosted: Tue Aug 28, 2007 4:13 am
woah! that was so.... so.... wow! two thumbs up! blaugh  

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PostPosted: Wed Jul 01, 2009 6:47 am
very nice... eek  
PostPosted: Wed Jul 01, 2009 6:48 am
very nice... eek  

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PostPosted: Sun Jul 05, 2009 9:23 pm
That one really spoke out
and not to mention the way
it sounded in mind so descriptive  
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