This is my little corner of the sob-forum. I'm gonna post some of my poems and smaller proses. I'd like feedback so tell me what you think.
Posted: Fri Mar 02, 2007 5:40 pm
This little poem is one out of three I had to write for Eng H 2. We had eight minuets to write each poem so if don't like it, I won't be offened.
--------------------- #1 Overworked Menstration The aftermath of creation An impossible war with your ovaries Unthinkably hellish Internal pain Raise cramps Raise hell "Thanks, Eve."
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Posted: Fri Mar 02, 2007 5:41 pm
This is the second poem out of three I had to write for Eng H 2. Enjoy.
--------------------- #2 Nintendo Rival cars Rival women Rival eachother Come together at the joystick Hug the colored-buttons Cry over lost points Eagerly taking cheats Manhood on the line Touching and grasphing the final life Don't let go
Posted: Fri Mar 02, 2007 5:52 pm
This is the third poem out of three I had to write for Eng H 2. Hope you like it.
--------------------- #3 January Hangover Awaken the magic Inspiration at last No more sleepless nights scarificed Born a simple love Now complicated Madness taking over Impossibly comforting Nothing lost nor gained Secrets are left open Visions now are true Just the desire is left To be with you
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