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Reply 44: Stairway to Poetry
Rotten ((it's about a tree branch NOT my life))

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Kirinkinetic Telepathetic

PostPosted: Fri Feb 09, 2007 2:16 pm
A single branch,
dark and decayed,
no life is left,
with fingers splayed,

it seems to me,
the leaves gone bitter,
any other end,
would not be fitter,

termite ridden,
and half eaten,
the branch died,
because it was beaten,

it's soul is gone,
it's heart is rotten,
it died because,
it was forgotten.
 
PostPosted: Mon Feb 26, 2007 3:56 pm
So beautiful! Wonderful personification and imagery. 10/10 smile  

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