The city of Shadows Fall. (campaign recruitment, Sill open)

[Vampire_loki4]

saint odium

dead boy kills

saint odium

Sorry about the screw up Saint it was the new guys fault I was just trying to get his character going.

It's cool just try to keep posts to where they are supposed to go.

yeah sorry about that anyway here's my character.
Loki http://www.myth-weavers.com/sheetview.php?sheetid=811716  

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Vampire_loki4

saint odium

dead boy kills

saint odium

Sorry about the screw up Saint it was the new guys fault I was just trying to get his character going.

It's cool just try to keep posts to where they are supposed to go.

yeah sorry about that anyway here's my character.
Loki ]http://www.myth-weavers.com/sheetview.php?sheetid=811716

Okay so you are missing a few things. First did you apply your ability score adjustments to your ability scores and you didn't have to put them in the order I gave them to you in. Second your base saves are blank. Third your base attack bonus is blank. Four you're missing all your class features. Five skills You have to many skills for your class, you get 4+Intelligence modifier for skill points so you can't have that many skills with points in them. Six what is the actual distance on the range for your weapons not what type of range they have. Seven is your character just wearing his armor, you don't have any other clothing written down. And lastly what other languages does your character speak besides common.  

[Kain Almasi]

dead boy kills

Vampire_loki4

saint odium

dead boy kills

saint odium

Sorry about the screw up Saint it was the new guys fault I was just trying to get his character going.

It's cool just try to keep posts to where they are supposed to go.

yeah sorry about that anyway here's my character.
Loki ]http://www.myth-weavers.com/sheetview.php?sheetid=811716

Okay so you are missing a few things. First did you apply your ability score adjustments to your ability scores and you didn't have to put them in the order I gave them to you in. Second your base saves are blank. Third your base attack bonus is blank. Four you're missing all your class features. Five skills You have to many skills for your class, you get 4+Intelligence modifier for skill points so you can't have that many skills with points in them. Six what is the actual distance on the range for your weapons not what type of range they have. Seven is your character just wearing his armor, you don't have any other clothing written down. And lastly what other languages does your character speak besides common.
Damn talk about critiquing a character.  

[Vampire_loki4]

saint odium

dead boy kills

Vampire_loki4

saint odium

dead boy kills

saint odium

Sorry about the screw up Saint it was the new guys fault I was just trying to get his character going.

It's cool just try to keep posts to where they are supposed to go.

yeah sorry about that anyway here's my character.
Loki ]http://www.myth-weavers.com/sheetview.php?sheetid=811716

Okay so you are missing a few things. First did you apply your ability score adjustments to your ability scores and you didn't have to put them in the order I gave them to you in. Second your base saves are blank. Third your base attack bonus is blank. Four you're missing all your class features. Five skills You have to many skills for your class, you get 4+Intelligence modifier for skill points so you can't have that many skills with points in them. Six what is the actual distance on the range for your weapons not what type of range they have. Seven is your character just wearing his armor, you don't have any other clothing written down. And lastly what other languages does your character speak besides common.

Damn talk about critiquing a character.
right lol I got a few things fixed  

[dead boy kills]

Vampire_loki4

saint odium

dead boy kills

Vampire_loki4

saint odium

It's cool just try to keep posts to where they are supposed to go.

yeah sorry about that anyway here's my character.
Loki ]http://www.myth-weavers.com/sheetview.php?sheetid=811716

Okay so you are missing a few things. First did you apply your ability score adjustments to your ability scores and you didn't have to put them in the order I gave them to you in. Second your base saves are blank. Third your base attack bonus is blank. Four you're missing all your class features. Five skills You have to many skills for your class, you get 4+Intelligence modifier for skill points so you can't have that many skills with points in them. Six what is the actual distance on the range for your weapons not what type of range they have. Seven is your character just wearing his armor, you don't have any other clothing written down. And lastly what other languages does your character speak besides common.

Damn talk about critiquing a character.

right lol I got a few things fixed
Still have a couple of things.  

[Kain Almasi]

Vampire_loki4

saint odium

dead boy kills

Vampire_loki4

saint odium

It's cool just try to keep posts to where they are supposed to go.

yeah sorry about that anyway here's my character.
Loki ]http://www.myth-weavers.com/sheetview.php?sheetid=811716

Okay so you are missing a few things. First did you apply your ability score adjustments to your ability scores and you didn't have to put them in the order I gave them to you in. Second your base saves are blank. Third your base attack bonus is blank. Four you're missing all your class features. Five skills You have to many skills for your class, you get 4+Intelligence modifier for skill points so you can't have that many skills with points in them. Six what is the actual distance on the range for your weapons not what type of range they have. Seven is your character just wearing his armor, you don't have any other clothing written down. And lastly what other languages does your character speak besides common.

Damn talk about critiquing a character.

right lol I got a few things fixed
Don't tell me tell the one running the game which would be dead boy kills or deadsy as he likes to be called.  

[dead boy kills]

Vampire_loki4

saint odium

dead boy kills

Vampire_loki4

saint odium

It's cool just try to keep posts to where they are supposed to go.

yeah sorry about that anyway here's my character.
Loki ]http://www.myth-weavers.com/sheetview.php?sheetid=811716

Okay so you are missing a few things. First did you apply your ability score adjustments to your ability scores and you didn't have to put them in the order I gave them to you in. Second your base saves are blank. Third your base attack bonus is blank. Four you're missing all your class features. Five skills You have to many skills for your class, you get 4+Intelligence modifier for skill points so you can't have that many skills with points in them. Six what is the actual distance on the range for your weapons not what type of range they have. Seven is your character just wearing his armor, you don't have any other clothing written down. And lastly what other languages does your character speak besides common.

Damn talk about critiquing a character.

right lol I got a few things fixed
Um so your base save are wrong they should be Fortitude 4, Reflex 4, Will 1. You still need to fix your skills and you still haven't done your class features.  

[dead boy kills]

Vampire_loki4

saint odium

dead boy kills

Vampire_loki4

saint odium

It's cool just try to keep posts to where they are supposed to go.

yeah sorry about that anyway here's my character.
Loki ]http://www.myth-weavers.com/sheetview.php?sheetid=811716

Okay so you are missing a few things. First did you apply your ability score adjustments to your ability scores and you didn't have to put them in the order I gave them to you in. Second your base saves are blank. Third your base attack bonus is blank. Four you're missing all your class features. Five skills You have to many skills for your class, you get 4+Intelligence modifier for skill points so you can't have that many skills with points in them. Six what is the actual distance on the range for your weapons not what type of range they have. Seven is your character just wearing his armor, you don't have any other clothing written down. And lastly what other languages does your character speak besides common.

Damn talk about critiquing a character.

right lol I got a few things fixed
In the column that says base on the saving throws should be 4, 4, 1.
(Edit) Weapon Finesse is kind of pointless for your character considering that you use ranged weapons primarily and melee as secondary or in emergencies. and your hit points are too high. They should only be 52 and you should have more feats.  

[Kain Almasi]

dead boy kills

Vampire_loki4

Damn I didn't realize he had so many things to fix. I would be glad to do it for him if I could edit his Myth Weaver sheet. You know it would take me about five minutes to fix it all and then on to the game.  

[dead boy kills]

saint odium

dead boy kills

Vampire_loki4

Damn I didn't realize he had so many things to fix. I would be glad to do it for him if I could edit his Myth Weaver sheet. You know it would take me about five minutes to fix it all and then on to the game.

That would be up to him to let you do it but I would suggest he do it himself so he gets used to doing it.  

[Kain Almasi]

dead boy kills

saint odium

dead boy kills

Vampire_loki4

Damn I didn't realize he had so many things to fix. I would be glad to do it for him if I could edit his Myth Weaver sheet. You know it would take me about five minutes to fix it all and then on to the game.

That would be up to him to let you do it but I would suggest he do it himself so he gets used to doing it.

True but I was just trying to help.  

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Vampire_loki4

saint odium

dead boy kills

saint odium

Sorry about the screw up Saint it was the new guys fault I was just trying to get his character going.

It's cool just try to keep posts to where they are supposed to go.

yeah sorry about that anyway here's my character.
Loki ]http://www.myth-weavers.com/sheetview.php?sheetid=811716

Cool I see you got your character finished and he looks good.  

[Vampire_loki4]

dead boy kills

Vampire_loki4

saint odium

dead boy kills

saint odium

Sorry about the screw up Saint it was the new guys fault I was just trying to get his character going.

It's cool just try to keep posts to where they are supposed to go.

yeah sorry about that anyway here's my character.
Loki ]http://www.myth-weavers.com/sheetview.php?sheetid=811716

Cool I see you got your character finished and he looks good.o yeah totally thanks  

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Vampire_loki4

dead boy kills

Vampire_loki4

saint odium

dead boy kills

saint odium

Sorry about the screw up Saint it was the new guys fault I was just trying to get his character going.

It's cool just try to keep posts to where they are supposed to go.

yeah sorry about that anyway here's my character.
Loki ]http://www.myth-weavers.com/sheetview.php?sheetid=811716

Cool I see you got your character finished and he looks good.

o yeah totally thanks
You're welcome.  

[Vampire_loki4]

so what now wait for more people to join?