Questing!

[The_Scarlet_Lark]

I am questing poetry and gold, but at this moment of time, I would love to read through some of your poetry. Send them to me via pm and I will give you constructive criticism. Gold however, is also nice.

(Formatting may be added to this thread, I just don't have the time for it at the moment)

 

[The_Scarlet_Lark]

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[hanafan36]

Pearl

If heaven and hell
Were to converge as one
What would become of it?
Truly, a rare thing of beauty
Pulchritudinous love
Confounding devilry
A pearl.

One ingenious soul
Created by God,
Or the devil,
Or both.

One who turns a mirror
To the masked demons
Rejecting they
Who so rejected your mother

One with the earth—
Indeed, it is earth’s nature
To hold both good and evil
But also to hide one
Or the other.

A pearl come out of hiding
Shines, never to blend in again
A thing of shocking beauty
A thing of esoteric truth

If truth were to be so open
What would become of it?
If one was born a saint and devil
Which would they become?

The wild things understand
Good and evil
Bad and good
They are not trapped
By a foreign need to choose.

Only humans;
Simple, ambiguous beings
Such as they are trapped.  

[The_Scarlet_Lark]

hanafan36

Pearl

Could you pm that to me like I said in the first post so that the thread doesn't become clogged with poetry and critiques?  

[Athena Vigil90]

I hate donating but I am in a good mood today so just send pm and I will tell u the amount of gold u r going to get  

[The_Scarlet_Lark]

Athena Vigil90

I hate donating but I am in a good mood today so just send pm and I will tell u the amount of gold u r going to get

Thank you =^.^=  

[Hello J adore]

Athena Vigil90

I hate donating but I am in a good mood today so just send pm and I will tell u the amount of gold u r going to get

I think u have to change your sig