fafiction skit!!! tell me what you think!

[marieaskelinton]

Kadaj- hey have you seen mother lately?
Loz- why is she always hiding I mean we do everything were told.
*Loz crying*
Kadaj- stop crying! maybe big brother can tell where she is.
Loz- but… I am your big brother and so is Yahzo.
Yahzo- don’t bring me into this!
Kadaj- not you two. I mean the black sheep.
Yahzo- are you sure your not talking about loz?
Loz- don’t make fun of me because I miss mother more then you do!
Kadaj- I am talking about Cloud.
Yahzo- Cloud is not a black sheep. He’s a dumb blond.
Loz- yeah if we were going to call anyone a black sheep wouldn’t it be Tifa?
Yahzo- who is Tifa?
Loz- no one
Yahzo- is she your girlfriend.
*Kadaj laughs*
Loz- what’s so funny Kadaj?
Kadaj- we all know that if anyone was going to have a girlfriend it would be me.
Yahzo- why? Cause you’re the baby?
Kadaj- I’m not the baby!
Loz- yes you are. You’re the youngest.
Yahzo- well if anyone should get a girl ir should be me. I mean I’m hot!
Kadaj- boy do I hate liars.
Yahzo-I’m not lying... Baby.
*Loz laughs*
Kadaj- shut up!
*yells at Loz*
Yahzo- now don't pick on Loz. He might go running to Tifa.
*Kadaj and Yahzo laugh*
Loz- hey don’t make fun of her!!!
Kadaj- did you ask mother before dating her?
Loz- No!!!
Yahzo- mother is going to be mad at you.
Loz- So!!!
Kadaj- in what spare time have you been dating this Tifa?
Loz- I haven’t *whispers*
Kadaj- what? Can’t hear you Loz.
Loz- I haven’t okay!!! *shouts*
Yahzo- he’s not only a cry baby, but also a liar.
*Kadaj laughs*
Loz- I’m going to find mother.
Yahzo- you might want to ask Cloud.
Kadaj- the black sheep I was talking about.
Loz- I’m going!!!
Yahzo- no ones stopping you.
*Loz leaves*
Voice- leave Cloud alone.
*Kadaj stands up*
Kadaj- show yourself!!!
*Yahzo stands up and pulls out is gun*
Kadaj- who are you?
Voice- a hero.
*Kadaj and Yahzo look around*
Yahzo- there no such thing as a hero.
Kadaj- you must be mistaken.
Voice- my name is Zack. Leave Cloud alone.
Kadaj- or what?
*Kadaj pulls out his sword*
*Zack’s ghost shows up*
Zack- or mother dies.

The end

tell me what you think!!!  

[Tempted Rogue Angel]

I LOVE it! It's really funny. When I read, "'or what?' 'Or mother dies,'" I cracked up. Great job! rofl  

[Nascere Dio]

MANNNN.. I LOVE ZACK. I mean or mother dies- thats scary. In my Fanfiction Along with Aeris he is a Guardian of Kingdom Hearts- sephiroth turnes out to be a nobody of a sweet acient boy who fell in love with the nonacient ancestor of the main character and is now keeper of Kingdom Hearts- i just thought that ff7 shoud have some more doings in the disney spin off of final fantasy Kingdom Hearts. its crazy i no- but its just like me!  

[AloneinIce]

someone screwed with a fanfiction i made
sepheroth finds out that riku is his son for some unknown reason