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Reply 44: Stairway to Poetry
Dont My Feelings Count?

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PostPosted: Sat Jul 18, 2009 6:11 am
Don't my feelings count?

you take reapeated stabs at my heart,
expecting awnsers right away,
not knowing that you are tearing it apart,
you think that i am okay,

you block my way with your anger,
spitting acid from your mouth,
i did not know this kind of danger,
nor that i had to make an ouath,

how many times must i hear you say,
that you want me to stop,
by monday, tuesday, or even wednsday,
do you want me to explode like a shaken up pop?

i zip my lips,
so as not to cause a scene,
there's too much to fix,
no where left to lean,

on the skytrain with no one by my side,
tears overflow from my eyes,
this is a train where no one knows what i feel inside,
are they thinking, "has she no pride." ?
 
PostPosted: Sat Jul 25, 2009 10:27 pm
ouath = oath???

it's good, but i can't feel your feelings in it...and more yet to come??
=D
 

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