Poetry from a guy....

[Angelicos Flame]

I post here all the poetry I type up... They will touch many different subjects such as death, loneliness, love, peace, happyness, elements (wind, water fire and earth) and subs (electricity, dust, mist, ice, magma, etc.) Some show what I have apssed through and are a good way to see into my mind without being too confuzed... Yes, I say it myself, my mind is one of the most craziest and complexe ones living that I know of... Feel free of posting your own work. I`ll certainly read it and give you suggestions about grammar, rhymes and other things related to grammatical and poetrical errors... Don`t worry, I don`t bite without a reason.... My mind is very open to ANYTHING in this world...  

[Angelicos Flame]

Here is my first sample... I have made this on Gaia's Valentine's Event... I just started typing after saying the first 2 sentences and ended up with this.... Enjoy!

My skin may be cold,
but I have a heart of gold,
So Take me,
Cuz I’m free

I’m single and 15
With you, I was always clean
I never harmed girls
Cuz I see them as precious pearls.

My love is as big as the sun,
But soothing as fun
I'll never let you go
Unless you desire so

Take and kiss me,
Cuz I'm free.
Be my valentine
And I'll might bring you to dine!


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