What do you think?

[Machine Deity]

I.
I'm a street co-sided
people holding' onto hope
I am a one way drive
with the doctor who put on your soft cast.

I see no divided equation in this last piece of soap
I am a streetlight illuminating your way home
cleanliness is sadness.
For when you tear away the flesh.
For when you tear away the flesh.

A cold
heavy down pour of sweet love is bold.
A hate is warm steel crutch.
A sin is bold loving touch.  

[Skullz Mc Neal]

kinda lost me at the end but it was good for the most part. 3nodding mrgreen  

[War Resistance]

i really love it too, but im a bit confused by it, would u pretty please give an explanation, cause i really like where its going  

[KityKatt27]

actually, the last stanzas my favorite