Going Under

[ll Shaza ll]

Okay, here's the first chapter in my story:
1
The End
It was a cold day in Wyoming, and I’d climbed over the fence of the wildlife reserve. I was in Yellowstone National Park with my mom.“Hayden!” Robby and my mom called at me from the other side of the fence. “Hayden, come back!” But I wasn’t listening. I was staring at the cheetah in my path. I heard my mom climb over the fence. She ended up next to me. “Mom, I like it.” I said. All of what happened next was very vivid in my memory.
I saw the cheetah walk, then trot into a run towards me. It had its teeth bared. I knew if I didn’t move, I was dead. Mom knew so too. But yet I stood my ground, as if I was frozen in place. “Come on!” Mom shouted. “Come on, move!” But instead of helping, she aimed her gun at the cheetah, and just as it was about to pounce, just as she was about to shoot, I ran. It struggled with her, biting and scratching. I admit it, it was my fault. Mom was cut up pretty bad, but she didn’t let go.
I was shocked, and then I tried to get the cheetah off her. It pinned mom to the ground and was probably about to maul her when I got her gun and shot it. I lifted it off her and I started sobbing, staring at the cheetah. The poor thing that did not have to die. I looked at my mother. I looked behind her…and my jaw dropped. A grizzly bear was coming towards the cheetah’s body. The park rangers were nowhere in sight. Then I saw them, two men. They closed the gate, wicked grins on their faces. Robby was trying to stop them, but it was too late.
I saw my mom turn around to face the bear. She whispered to me, “Run”. When I moved, the bear lunged, but she jumped in front of me. “No!” I screamed. I ran and tried to shoot the bear with Mom’s gun, but it bat me aside, breaking two of my ribs. I flew through the air into the fence, which two new park rangers quickly opened and saved me, but then they saw my mother. The bear was biting at her neck, and she fighting, shouting for help. Robby was next to me, screaming. They supported me to stand up, but I was trying to fight, to shout back to my mom. The rangers settled me as much as they could and killed the bear. We took my mother to the hospital with me, which was where I was now.
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A month later I was out the hospital but she was still there. I visited her every day. Today, though, she was awake! Bloody, but awake! When I saw her I grimaced. Most of her hair was gone, and her head and neck were scratched up the most. “Ma?” I asked softly. She mumbled to me. “I love you.” Then she heaved a painful sigh. She started to close her eyes. “Ma, no please!” I said. She smiled at me, a smile that showed no happiness.
“Ma!” I said, as she closed her eyes and took one last breath. The heart monitor started beeping. I kept looking from the heart monitor to her pain stricken dead face. I couldn’t believe she’s gone I wasn’t going to cry though. I got up and walked right out of that hospital, healing ribs and all, and never went back. I went and got Robby. I just ran out those doors, and kept going until I got back to Yellowstone National Park. I stared into that fence. I ran with Robby, and broke into a pet shop. I stole a kitten. She was my life now…  

[vampire_angelz]

that is a good beggining