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PostPosted: Wed Nov 15, 2017 6:05 pm
Mattysandwich
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Honey you're doing amazing sweetie! The only thing I need to get this custom approve is to get rid of that stipulation where you can reduce the cost of re-sealing objects.


So I think that it's fine as is, so I'd like to present my thoughts as to why. If you agree than yay, if not I can make that change. Okay so SN has no item / weapon carry limit, and ostensibly one can carry as many weapons as they want with no issue. In addition drawing and/or putting away weapons doesn't cost any activations or stamina. So when it comes to my seal, putting weapons in the seal and taking them out is mechanically the same as putting weapons back into the magic backpack where other RPCs keep their items.

Obviously though the seals do make hiding weapons somewhat easier. I think that an initial C - rank cost to create a permanent tattoo seal linked to unique weapons for storage is an okay trade for the mainly cosmetic benefit of being able to hide weapons. I did not include a cost for retrieving the weapons or putting them back however because as mentioned earlier it costs nothing to draw and put away weapons already.

The cost of five chakra is for the special circumstance of when one of the bonded weapons is not actually in hand. The ability to retrieve weapons is more than just a cosmetic difference of course. So that's why I assigned a chakra cost to that as well. That cost is directly based on an approved custom weapon that allows it to be returned to hand currently exists [x].  
PostPosted: Wed Nov 15, 2017 6:16 pm
Naomi Tenshu


So Fruity and I talked it over. We both thank you for being so calm in explaining your argument. Your custom is approved without any need of changes.  

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PostPosted: Wed Nov 15, 2017 6:18 pm

Character: Karuto Raiken
Technique Name: Thunder Lord's Strike
Rank: X
Type: Complex Taijutsu
Element: Lightning
Description: An augment/complimentary action to Formless Taijutsu, by paying the equal amount of Chakra as the Formless Taijutus's Rank, Karuto can emit a quick bolt of lightning from the source of the strike. The lightning travels in a straight line until it connects with something or passes 100 feet. For every rank the lightning grows in strength, dealing shocks and minor burns scaling per rank. Additional force damage is dealt two ranks below the rank of the strike used. ( I.E. A C Rank Lightning Strike deals E Rank Force Damage ). These bolts are thin, yet fast, with even an S+ Bolt being no wider than a few feet. The lightning strikes gain half the speed bonus used in the formless strike that created it.

Technique Name: Air Bounce
Rank: X
Type: Complex Taijutsu
Element: Null
Description: By kicking against the air very rapidly and expelling chakra out the bottom of his foot, Karuto can "leap" while already in the air. This allows him to change direction mid-jump. However, he will insist to all others that he is just "flying." 1 direction change per Rank of Stamina and Chakra Expended. To "hover/fly"requires Karuto must expend a direction change for every action he stays he in the air to perform.



Mattysandwich


Lightning Punches should be good now. It costs equal stamina/chakra to use the attack. I.E. E Rank Formless Punch E Rank Lightning, barely any damage if that were to hit.

Air Bounce should be good


 
PostPosted: Wed Nov 15, 2017 6:49 pm
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Approved.  

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PostPosted: Wed Nov 15, 2017 7:18 pm

Character: Chole Blueford
Technique Name: Metal Minds and Metal Hearts
Rank: X
Type: Bloodline/Passive
Element: N/A
Description: A bloodline technique designed by Chole in order ensure that her metal is in its purest form. Passive once learned this jutsu requires no chakra to cast, and instead allows any other bloodline jutsu to be cast at the X rank for a 50% increased cost. Any effects will be subsequently increased or modified to suit their increased rank.


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Character: Chole Blueford
Technique Name: Bountiful Harvest
Rank: X
Type: Maruton
Element: N/A
Description: A jutsu that is only possible thanks to the sheer amount of time Chole has spent with her companion Bella, as well as a testament of the bond they share. Chole is able to temporarily draw from Bella's chakra pool in order to cast her own techniques and vice versa for the remainder of the battle. In order for this technique to be preformed both parties must also be conscious and within the same thread. It should be noted that this jutsu is draw and not take from. Meaning that the chakra cost of the technique may be split any way. Ex a B cost jutsu can be split down the middle in cost, fully paid for by one party, or any other variation of payment. Trained for at each body rank.


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PostPosted: Thu Nov 16, 2017 7:10 am

Character: Mizuki
Technique Name: Kyori Būsuto [ Range Boost ]
Rank: X [ Learned as B ]
Type: Sensor Jutsu
Element: Maruton
Description: With an intentional application of chakra one is able to supercharge the range of their natural ability to sense chakra. Starting at two [2] kilometers at E rank, range is increased by two [2] kilometers per rank. This range increase do not increase one's ability to collect information they would not normally be able to acquire with the Oracle discipline. [ Requires Oracle Discipline to learn ]


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PostPosted: Sun Nov 19, 2017 12:44 pm
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Character: Hachiro Hirohiko
Technique Name: Fields of War
Rank: E [ Spiritual ]
Type: Bukijutsu / Fuuinjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: To use this technique, the user must carry a metal case of katana or other medium sized weapons. This technique is the most necessary technique above all to learn in order to execute the Infinite One-Sword style techniques to follow. The user user throws their large pack of sheathed katana into the air and forms a tiger hand seal. A large cloud of smoke erupts from the pack and all of the case's swords are unsealed from within and descend upon the battlefield, littering the area with any swords the user has sealed in the container. The released swords are scattered randomly throughout the immediate area and stick out of the ground with only a few inches of their blades burrowed into the ground. A bright yellow caution tape that reads "KEEP OUT" in an even pattern is extended around the immediate area, wrapping around thin structures and even a few of the scattered blades. The tape serves no purpose on its own other than to seem oddly restricting to foes within its bounds. With a tiger hand seal the user can reseal any number of their swords back into the case they were summoned from.




Character: Hachiro Hirohiko
Technique Name: Sword Fang
Rank: D [ Simple ]
Type: Bukijutsu
Element: N/A
Description: The user begins this attack by hitting three swords that had been previously positioned standing within striking distance to the user. By simultaneously hitting these swords near their partially burrowed tips with an incredibly fast swing of the user’s Initiative Blade, it causes all three of them to slash upwards, in a manner reminiscent of a "fang".


Character: Hachiro Hirohiko
Technique Name: Restrictive Current
Rank: C [ Spiritual ]
Type: Bukijutsu
Element: N/A
Description: The yellow caution tape distributed throughout the immediate battlefield by the Fields of War (or Bloody Fields of War) technique is imbued with durability bolstering chakra so that the tape can actually act to hold others within and outside of the ongoing fight. The tape cannot be cut or damaged by outside forces and only jutsu that are B-rank or higher can break the tape.
• This technique's cost is applied on top of the cost of Fields of War or Bloody Fields of War.



Character: Hachiro Hirohiko
Technique Name: Vertical Line
Rank: C [ Simple ]
Type: Bukijutsu
Element: N/A
Description: Following the Sword Fang technique, all three swords momentarily hover in the air, where the user will then proceed to use the current sword in their hand to sequentially hit each blade, thereby launching each of them directly at the enemy. The projectile swords are launched with such precise power that it would take one with at equal or higher speed than the user to avoid.


Character: Hachiro Hirohiko
Technique Name: Addition
Rank: C [ Complex ]
Type: Bukijutsu
Element: N/A
Description: This technique utilizes the numerous swords involved in the use of the Infinite One-Sword Style and both the user's skill and speed as a swordsman. They attack the opponent a total of eleven times in rapid succession, each at different angles and positions. With each strike the opponent is left stunned by the impressive power and the sword is left behind attached to the opponent's body where the blade made contact by a chakra bond. The user then lands the final blow, making a total of twelve devastating blows.


Character: Hachiro Hirohiko
Technique Name: Multiplication
Rank: D [ Complex ]
Type: Bukijutsu
Element: N/A
Description: This is a follow-up to the Addition technique. While the opponent is still impaled by the previous twelve strikes, the user attacks once again, striking these remaining swords with their Initiative Blade so as to repeat the succession of movements preformed previously. This results in doubling the attack damage that was already done, as it cuts the opponent with the twelve swords all over again. This totals up to twenty-four strikes being received by the enemy within an incredibly short period, leaving little to no chance for a counter attack. The severe damage this move causes in conjunction with Addition can cripple a foe temporarily.


Character: Hachiro Hirohiko
Technique Name: Bloody Fields of War
Rank: B [ Spiritual ]
Type: Bukijutsu
Element: N/A
Description: This technique is a more perfected version of the initiative technique to the Infinite One-Sword style, Fields of War. The only difference is that this technique is developed to more accurately set the user's swords about the battlefield. This technique's precision is so great that the swords can be directed to land where the user wishes, requiring an additional hand sign to properly mold the chakra. More often than not, it is used to rain the blades directly upon foes to reduce enemies earlier into a fight. Like the Fields of War technique, this technique must be used before any fighting with the Infinite One-Sword style can begin. The "KEEP OUT" caution tape is also still distributed around the immediate battlefield upon this technique's execution.
 
PostPosted: Fri Nov 24, 2017 4:46 am
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Character: Kenshin Kōsei
Technique Name: Gentle Lunge
Rank: C | Complex
Type: Hyuga Bloodline | Bukijutsu/Taijutsu
Element: Gentle Fist
Description: Kenshin lunges forward and stabs the body of his opponent sending a C rank amount of chakra out of either his blade or his fingers. If a tenketsu point is hit then a chakra bullet made out of the victim's own chakra exits the body from the opposite direction of impact. If the attack makes contact then the amount of chakra used to perform this technique is refunded to Kenshin at the cost to the opponent.

This technique requires the use of Kenshin's custom weapon, Purity, for it to be utilized as a bukijutsu technique. If the custom weapon is not used then it is a taijutsu technique.




Character: Kenshin Kōsei
Technique Name: Vibrating Gentle Fist
Rank: B | Complex
Type: Hyuga Bloodline | Bukijutsu/Taijutsu
Element: Gentle Fist
Description: Kenshin applies chakra into either his fist or the tip of his blade. This chakra causes a violent vibration with a particular frequency used to shatter bones and armor upon contact.

This technique requires the use of Kenshin's custom weapon, Purity, for it to be utilized as a bukijutsu technique. If the custom weapon is not used then it is a taijutsu technique.




Character: Kenshin Kōsei
Technique Name: Gentle Blade's Prison
Rank: B | Complex
Type: Hyuga Bloodline | Bukijutsu
Element: Gentle Fist
Description: Kenshin jumps over his opponent and delivers five instantaneous thrusts from his blade which dispenses chakra around the enemy's perimeter. The chakra from the blade is used to create a spherical barrier which traps the opponent. Other gentle fist techniques can be introduced through the prison by jabbing the outside of it through Purity's special abilities.

This technique requires the use of Kenshin's custom weapon, Purity.




Character: Kenshin Kōsei
Technique Name: Gentle Gate Severance
Rank: A | Complex
Type: Hyuga Bloodline | Bukijutsu/Taijutsu
Element: Gentle Fist
Description: Kenshin performs a single jab into one of the enemy's eight chakra pathway gates. With this gate locked a massive amount of chakra is forbidden from use by the victim. The gate severed from use controls twelve and a half percent of the victim's total chakra pool. This effect lasts for ten of the victim's post. It also causes severe internal organ damage depending on which gate was attacked.

This technique requires the use of Kenshin's custom weapon, Purity, for it to be utilized as a bukijutsu technique. If the custom weapon is not used then it is a taijutsu technique.




Character: Kenshin Kōsei
Technique Name: Gentle Injection
Rank: A | Complex
Type: Hyuga Bloodline | Bukijutsu/Taijutsu
Element: Gentle Fist
Description: Kenshin sends a jab into the opponent's body which sends a surge of chakra through the blood stream. It causes severe pain as it travels through the veins and eventually begins to slowly close the arteries of the heart. After ten of the opponent's posts without medical attention or using an S-Rank level kai the arteries will be completely blocked.


This technique requires the use of Kenshin's custom weapon, Purity, for it to be utilized as a bukijutsu technique. If the custom weapon is not used then it is a taijutsu technique.




Character: Kenshin Kōsei
Technique Name: Eight Trigrams: Heavenly Armor
Rank: C-A | Complex
Type: Hyuga Bloodline | Taijutsu
Element: Gentle Fist
Description: By releasing a massive amount of chakra of D-A rank from his own tenketsu points using gentle fist methods Kenshin creates a coating of swirling chakra over his own skin. It is essentially a condensed version of the Heavenly Palm Rotation so knowledge of that technique is required. This chakra acts as a shield which lasts for a duration of ten of his posts.



Character: Kenshin Kōsei
Technique Name: Eight Trigrams: Divine Justice
Rank: S | Complex
Type: Hyuga Bloodline | Bukijutsu/Taijutsu
Element: Gentle Fist
Description: Kenshin displays his mastery as a Hyuga clansman by focusing an S-Rank amount of chakra into a highly concentrated point be it blade or fist. If this makes full contact with the body the chakra travels through the skin and completely obliterates the single organ it comes in contact with from the massive amount of chakra applied. From the outside, the opponent appears to be completely unharmed as the skin was not affected, but the organ touched is completely destroyed on contact.

This technique requires the use of Kenshin's custom weapon, Purity, for it to be utilized as a bukijutsu technique. If the custom weapon is not used then it is a taijutsu technique.

 

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PostPosted: Fri Nov 24, 2017 6:58 pm

Character:Jeon and Jay Park
Technique Name: Journey to the West
Rank: X (Learned as B)
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Lightning/Suiton
Description: Utilitzing the raiton and suiton chakra within them to form a cloud anywhere within line of sight that allows the creator to stand upon. It's just big enough for two people to ride on it safely and moves at the behest of the users chakra. For every rank of chakra invested, this cloud gains a slight increase to speed for whoever is riding it, but the technique must be known in order for it to be ridden. This cloud can go as high as a cumulonimbus cloud and as is at least as fast as its creator. It also lasts for a base of five posts with an extra post per rank above E.

Matty gave me permission to use his base concept.


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PostPosted: Fri Nov 24, 2017 7:55 pm

Character: Kisuke Shinsetsu
Technique Name: Infinity Marks
Rank:A - Passive
Type: Fuinjutsu
Element: Null
Description: This technique tags along with Gram blade. Forcing the user to use up 3 custom slots instead of 2. It will cause marking to appear on the users skin. The more chakra absorbed causing the tattoos to crawl further across the body of the user. Tattoos from the user's core outward stopping at the neck but spreading everywhere else. (Mom would be so proud...)
* The amount of stored chakra is equal to that of the users chakra level.
* Can also place extra storage seals on other whom the user is extremely close with. (Max 3)
* As the stored chakra is used, the tattoos recede from sight in the direction of the users core.


 


Character: Kisuke Shinsetsu
Technique Name: Semipermeable Defense
Rank:X (B for learning purposes)
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Null
Description: This technique takes Kisuke's chakra and form a dome around him, Though this technique is not perfect. Based on the amount of chakra used it will negate a percentage of the damage. No hand seals are neccesary for this technique making it a perfect last resort defense.
E Rank 25% Negated
D Rank 40% Negated
C Rank 55% Negated
B Rank 70% Negated
A Rank 85% Negated
S Rank 95% Negated

 



Character: Kisuke Shinsetsu
Technique Name: Sin Mode
Rank:B C-Upkeep | A B-Upkeep
Type: Bloodline
Element: Null
Description: Kisuke has never been satisfied with being the same as everyone else. He's always wanted to reach for greater hieghts. Thus he has built upon his indepth knowledge of his clan to create a technique that surpasses them. Kisuke is able to merge at an cellular level with his partners. His physical appearence drastically changes. And his voice has a vibrating sound effect, as if multiple people are speaking at the same instance. The transformations is split into three tiers, depending on how many pets are fused. 1 pet, 2 pets, or 3 pets. As this is a improvement upon the Inuzuka technique, All Inuzuka jutsu are available to all tiers. Base post limit is 3 posts, after that Up keep cost is required.

Abilities
* When fused two stats(three stats at Tier 3) must be chosen and be supremely increased(can stack)
* Fused body can make use of animal traits of the animals that he is fused with.
* While in this form all Inuzuka techniques become X rank able.
* Up-keep is cut in half in a post where chakra is not used.



Limitations/Restrictions
* Unlike the Inuzuka ability which has no cost or upkeep this technique is signifcantly improved and requires both.
* This mode does not gain the collaborative perk of raising jutsu ability's ranks with the fused pet(s).
* After the technique is ended or cancelled, the separation from the animal partner(s) evenly distributes chakra & stamina between all who participated. Individual Chakra/Stamina takes a total of two minutes to be restored back to normal. (outside combat, two posts; inside combat, four posts)
Tier 1
Kisuke Fang "Sloth"
Kisuke Pet2 "Pride"
Kisuke Pet3 "Lust"
Tier 2
Kisuke Fang Pet2 "Greed"
Kisuke Pet3 Fang "Envy"
Kisuke Pet2 Pet3 "Gluttony"
Tier 3
Kisuke Fang Pet2 Pet3 "Wrath"
.

 




Character:Kisuke Shinsetsu
Technique Name: Selective Ignorance
Rank: D
Type: Genjutsu- Primary: Sight, Secondary: Sound
Element: Null
Description: This genjutsu needs a single handseal to activate which does not need to be held, after activation the user chooses a thing. Once this object is gone from the victims sight.(Via Jutsu or simply leaving the victims field of view) The genjutsu will overlay the environment around the user. The chosen object will no longer be seen by the victim, and any sounds the chosen object makes is muted to the victim. Even changes to the environment that the chosen object makes will not be seen or heard by the victim. Illusion will break if the victim and object come into contact.




Character: Kisuke Shinsetsu
Technique Name: Ninjutsu
Rank:E
Type: Genjutsu
Element: Null
Description: This Genjutsu allows Kisuke to recreate any ninjutsu he's seen and direct it towards the opponent. He can even vary the appearance of the ninjutsu to make it appear large and more threatening like a higher level jutsu. If interacting with a real ninjutsu the genjutsu will appear to be defeated by the opponents jutsu.
 

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PostPosted: Fri Nov 24, 2017 9:44 pm
Hello all! Apologies for the wait. As the customs mods are busy with holiday work/travel/family reunions/etc., I'm temporarily filling in. Please defer to their judgment should they ask you to change something.

Evanescently Magnificent
Metal Minds and Metal Hearts: Is the increased cost based on the technique's original rank or its adjusted rank?

Bountiful Harvest: I know we spoke about this recently. You may want to contact XAyame_HatakeX to see how she did this sort of thing. It took her two custom slots to do it; I believe they were "Hybrid Mode"
and "Goddess of the Hunt".


Naomi Tenshu
Range Boost: I'm curious as to how this differs from Kagura Shingan. As it stands, I'm not sure if there's a reason to submit this as a custom given the existence of that Jutsu, but is there a hidden benefit I'm not seeing?


Kondo Kaicho
Several techniques make reference to an Initiative Blade. What is this referring to?

Fields of War: The concept is fine and it sounds pretty awesome, but it at least needs to be a higher rank. I would suggest C- or B-Rank in order to bring it into line with Projectile Weapons or Heavenly Chain Disaster.

Sword Fang: Approved.

Restrictive Current: I need something clarified: "The tape cannot be cut or damaged by outside forces"; does this refer to anyone who isn't the user, anyone outside the area affected, or something else? The rest of it is fine, but that line may have to go.

Vertical Line: This would have to run off of the defender's reflexes. The way it's written this sounds like dodging it becomes more difficult based on the user's body rank. Is this the case?

Addition: At minimum this should be B-Rank. The other customs mods may have some other input on it.

Multiplication: Bump it up to B-Rank, minimum.

Bloody Fields of War: This should be at least one rank higher than whatever rank you change Fields of War to. Other than that, approved.


Kumurai Kaicho
Gentle Lunge: Approved.

Vibrating Gentle Fist: How does this interact with armor, exactly? Does it gain a rank of effectiveness against it, bypass it, etc.?

Gentle Blade's Prison: Approved.

Gentle Gate Severance: Denied. There are higher-cost medical techniques that deal with the gates and do less.

Gentle Injection: Denied. This is too far into the realm of medical techniques. It may be acceptable to tie this in with progression in the Medic [Job], but you'll have to contact one of the other approval mods to work something out there.

Heavenly Armor: Reduce duration to 4-6 posts. Following that, approved.

Divine Justice: As with Gentle Injection.


NOJAMNOJAMNOJAM
Knock the base duration down to two posts and it's approved.


Grand Chevalier Haji
Infinity Marks: The capacity of this seal and its Chakra-sharing effects are simply too much, especially when compared to Infuuin, which is a higher rank but more limited. Another customs mod may have more to say on the subject.

Semipermeable Defense: Denied. The scale would need to be significantly readjusted, as paying E-Rank to negate 50% of incoming damage won't fly.

Sin Mode: Denied. Custom slots can't be used to gain more custom slots. The particulars of the merging I'm not too sure about, particularly the activations; unless there's a "merging" technique that allows an increase in activations that I'm not aware of, I'm going to have to deny that aspect as well.

Selective Ignorance: Approved.

"Ninjutsu": If you want the target to feel pain as though they were properly hit by the technique, this can't be E-Rank.


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PostPosted: Sat Nov 25, 2017 1:26 am
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Character: Hachiro Hirohiko
Technique Name: Fields of War
Rank: B [ Spiritual ]
Type: Bukijutsu / Fuuinjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: To use this technique, the user must carry a metal case of katana or other medium sized weapons. This technique is the most necessary technique above all to learn in order to execute the techniques to follow. The user user throws their large pack of sheathed katana into the air and forms a tiger hand seal. A large cloud of smoke erupts from the pack and all of the case's swords are unsealed from within and descend upon the battlefield, littering the area with any swords the user has sealed in the container. The released swords are scattered randomly throughout the immediate area and stick out of the ground with only a few inches of their blades burrowed into the ground. A bright yellow caution tape that reads "KEEP OUT" in an even pattern is extended around the immediate area, wrapping around thin structures and even a few of the scattered blades. The tape serves no purpose on its own other than to seem oddly restricting to foes within its bounds. With a tiger hand seal the user can reseal any number of their swords back into the case they were summoned from.



Character: Hachiro Hirohiko
Technique Name: Restrictive Current
Rank: C [ Spiritual ]
Type: Fuuin/Buki
Element: N/A
Description: The yellow caution tape distributed throughout the immediate battlefield by the Fields of War (or Bloody Fields of War) technique is imbued with durability bolstering chakra so that the tape reacts to those who attempt to enter or exit the range of the user's swords unsealed by Fields of War with the use of a single hand seal. For the duration of four posts, the tape can be manipulated by another additional hand sign to move, creating barriers of the restrictive tape which drag swords caught in its path along with it, making an attempt to break through just as dangerous. In order to break through the barrier, an opponent must simply use a technique of a higher rank.



Character: Hachiro Hirohiko
Technique Name: Vertical Line
Rank: C [ Simple ]
Type: Bukijutsu
Element: N/A
Description: Following the Sword Fang technique, all three swords momentarily hover in the air, where the user will then proceed to use the current sword in their hand to sequentially hit each blade, thereby launching each of them directly at the enemy. If the opponent's body rank is lower than the users, the blades movements become blurred and hart to see clearly.


Character: Hachiro Hirohiko
Technique Name: Addition
Rank: B [ Simple ]
Type: Bukijutsu
Element: N/A
Description: The user slashes an opponent, leaving their blade stuck into their target. If the primary attack is successful, the following strikes succeed undaunted. The user will slash the foe eleven more times from various angles using a different sword each time, leaving their blade in place.



Character: Hachiro Hirohiko
Technique Name: Multiplication
Rank: B [ Simple ]
Type: Bukijutsu
Element: N/A
Description: This is a follow-up to the Addition technique that requires the previous technique have been successful. While the opponent is still injured by the previous strikes, the user attacks once again, striking these remaining swords with their blade in hand so as to repeat the succession of movements preformed previously. This results in doubling the attack damage that was already done, as it cuts the opponent with the swords all over again. This totals in double the number of injuries that the Addition Technique generated.


Character: Hachiro Hirohiko
Technique Name: Bloody Fields of War
Rank: B [ Spiritual ]
Type: Bukijutsu
Element: N/A
Description: This technique is a more perfected version of the initiative technique to the Fields of War. The only difference is that this technique is developed to more accurately set the user's swords about the battlefield. This technique's precision is so great that the swords can be directed to land where the user wishes, requiring an additional hand sign to properly mold the chakra. More often than not, it is used to rain the blades directly upon foes to reduce enemies earlier into a fight. Like the Fields of War technique, this technique must be used before any fighting with the Infinite One-Sword style can begin. The "KEEP OUT" caution tape is also still distributed around the immediate battlefield upon this technique's execution.
 

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PostPosted: Sat Nov 25, 2017 2:02 am
Ergo War
Hello all! Apologies for the wait. As the customs mods are busy with holiday work/travel/family reunions/etc., I'm temporarily filling in. Please defer to their judgment should they ask you to change something.

Evanescently Magnificent
Metal Minds and Metal Hearts: Is the increased cost based on the technique's original rank or its adjusted rank?

Bountiful Harvest: I know we spoke about this recently. You may want to contact XAyame_HatakeX to see how she did this sort of thing. It took her two custom slots to do it; I believe they were "Hybrid Mode"
and "Goddess of the Hunt".



1. It was based on the adjusted rank but whatever you think i could get away with to be honest. Also can customs be overwritten? If so I was wondering if that was something I would be able to do with this one. The thing is I only need this custom until alterations styles are unlocked again since there is already a style that does what I want this jutsu to do except better.

2. I haven't talked to her but from what I'm reading she only does it with one custom. Specifically the hybrid mode since from my understanding(?) Goddess of the Hunt is a sage type that increases her jutsu/physical strength and allow one of the two gather nature chakra for the other to use. Anyway Hybrid mode turns her and her pet into a single werewolf with doubled stats, [1] rank increase in tai/buki techs, and a combined stamina pool. It doesn't say how long the transformation lasts for either, but is that something you would be looking for? Or perhaps I could add some kind of internal cool down anytime one of us takes chakra from the other?
 
PostPosted: Sat Nov 25, 2017 4:46 am
Ergo War
Hello all! Apologies for the wait. As the customs mods are busy with holiday work/travel/family reunions/etc., I'm temporarily filling in. Please defer to their judgment should they ask you to change something.

Naomi Tenshu
Range Boost: I'm curious as to how this differs from Kagura Shingan. As it stands, I'm not sure if there's a reason to submit this as a custom given the existence of that Jutsu, but is there a hidden benefit I'm not seeing?


So the point of this custom is that you can still move due to being oracle discipline. When I looked at Kagura's I noticed something that to me feels like a hole or missing design element. It's widely considered by the guild to be kind of like the sensor tech above all others. But unfortunately it benefits the sensor class in an unequal manner. When using the technique, those with Zoom and Resolution retain their bonuses while effectively gaining Oracle's at a distance far greater than Oracle for the cost of not being able to move and chakra. When somebody with Oracle learns the technique they extend their range but gain no additional benefits and pay the same cost as the other two types. Indeed a non sensor nin, actually gains more than oracle sensor does when using the technique because they gain the range and chakra sensing. In my mind Oracle then should receive some kind of benefit so that they aren't getting the short end of the stick here. That would either be the ability to move (as they already innately possess chakra sensing), a cost reduction, or perhaps the gaining of information they would not usually receive.

I made this custom on the hope that either I could rectify through a custom what I see as getting the short end of the stick compared to other sensors, or to bring attention to this issue in a way that is faster than using the input thread.  

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