My drawings (please critique)

[Meeptard]

These are some of my newer drawings... I'm thirteen years old, I've been drawing for three years, as of 2010. =) I started with manga, and I've been slowly stepping away from that style. But, I still enjoy manga.

Hope you like them, and I would love it if you would critique anything you feel like critiquing.





 

[chocolategirl15]

the 1st 1 and the raven are great!
but the others needs a litle work....but how can i say i suck at drawing...=_=" i'm not that good  

[-Senka-of-Darkness-]

ok the first one and the raven r great but the others need work  

[Coolgirl216]

i like all ur drawings they r nice =]  

[Meeptard]

Thanks! I know some of them need work, but I was experimenting with new styles and all.  

[LunarColors]

CAN CHU DO MY AVI PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE?!  

[Lunar Sonnet]

they look really good.  

[Niko Narshe]

Your first one is awesome  

[Intruskin]

I like them all especially the first one and the raven  

[iCosplayTastic]

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i LOVE the first one!!!
i also like the blue-jay one and the raven ones to!~
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[Meeptard]

Thank you! =)  

[LunariaKasai]

Ok, first off.. You have great potential but you are lacking in some places of dimension and perspective. Try to draw something more than side views. Try looking at my art gallery to get some ideas of what I am talking about.

http://forbiddenloveforever.deviantart.com/gallery/  

[The_Graceful_Nobody]

i have to agree. the 1st one is awesome and the raven is crafted so fine but the others do need some work  

[iiEpicOne]

ok # 1 3 and 4 waz great but a little more accesory on number one would and the others are litte fuzzy wuzzy but ur a great artiest pirate  

[Hari Quiet Soul]

OMG I love birds xd heart