◢S H I N I G A M IXXS K E L E T O N Give me a hero and I will write you a tragedy
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⌈Name⌉ Arveildir Suojelija
⌈Nickname⌉ Dante / Death / Commander (back when he was alive and commanding a army)
⌈Alias⌉ Kenpachi / The God of Judgement
⌈Gender⌉ Male
⌈Age⌉ Appearance: 22 / Actual age: 1400
⌈Sexual Orientation⌉ Straight
⌈Weight⌉ 95.25439kg / 210 Ib
⌈Physique⌉ Athletic
⌈Height⌉ 6' 10"
⌈Scars/Tattoos/Piercings⌉ His body is covered in scars and scars over his heart from when he was alive.
⌈Unique Features⌉ Sakura leaves are always falling around and following him. His zanpakuto spirit manifest and follows him every now and then. He also wears a reiatsu suppressor scarf (Although the only thing he can do with is shikai).
⌈Previous Position⌉ Dead man
⌈Current Position⌉ 11th Division Captain
⌈Faction⌉ Goetei 13
⌈Alignment⌉ Lawfully Good
⌈Justification⌉ To protect and make the world a safer place.
⌈Zanpaktou Spirit Personality⌉ Rose (on the left) is kind, caring, and sweet
Surma (on the right) is mean, cold-hearted, and self centered
⌈Reiatsu Personality⌉ Black outline with blood red and gold
⌈Shikai Release Phrase⌉ "Ascend to the heavens Surma."
⌈Physical Changes⌉ His eyes turn blood red
⌈Enviornmental Changes⌉ Ten meters around him, people feel the grim reaper's scythe at their throat and they see vicious souls emitting from him. No physical harm is dealt to them.
⌈Passive Ability⌉ High speed regeneration, minor wounds take on post to heal, three post for broken bones, 5 for major wounds, 7 for limb loss
⌈Shikai Technique #1⌉ Devil Slice He feeds his reiryoku back into his zanpakuto ,enhancing each strike. It lasts for 5 posts, the cooldown is 10 posts.
⌈Shikai Technique #2⌉ Angel Blast He gathers reiatsu in zanpakuto then release it as a shock wave or blast. The distance is ten meters. Last one post, the cooldown is five
⌈Shikai Technique #3⌉ Nephilim Shield He can create a shield out of reiryoku, it's big enough to cover his chest and it blocks physical attacks. He views the princess as humanity and the surrounding monsters as the protectors. Lasts 10 posts cooldown is 15.
⌈Shikai Technique #4⌉ Include distances, post durations and cooldowns.
⌈Shikai Technique #5⌉ Answer Here. Include distances, post durations and cooldowns.
⌈Bankei Release Phrase⌉ "Descend, walk beside me and become my equal Rose."
⌈Physical Changes⌉ His eyes turn Gold.
⌈Enviornmental Changes⌉ 15 meters around him, people feel Archangel Raphael's sword of judgement hanging over their head judging whether or if they should live or die. No physical harm is dealt to them.
⌈Bankai Technique #1⌉ Devil Slayer He can focus all of his reiryoku on strength, speed, defense, regeneration and other stuff, but there is repercussions ex. If he focused it on strength, he will suffer from blood loss and a few broken bone. Self inflicted, post durations 20 and cooldowns 30. The chosen stat will double
⌈Bankai Technique #2⌉ Guardian Angel He can trade places with a ally, that is within a 10 ten meters range of him, post durations 1 and cooldowns 6
⌈Bankai Technique #3⌉ Nephilim Protection He can reinforce and change his clothes into armor, the armor increase his defense but will increase by three but at the cost of his speed. distances self inflicted, post durations 20 and cooldowns 40.
⌈Bankai Technique #4⌉ Answer Here. Include distances, post durations and cooldowns.
⌈Bankai Technique #5⌉ Answer Here. Include distances, post durations and cooldowns.
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BLEACH ▶ Catastrophic Calamity
Fenava
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Posted: Fri Jan 13, 2017 11:45 am
◢S H I N I G A M IXXS K E L E T O N Give me a hero and I will write you a tragedy
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⌈Hoho Techniques⌉
// Technique Name: Senka (閃花, Flash Blossom) Description: Moving behind the opponent, the practitioner attacks and seals their Saketsu (鎖結, Chain Binding) and Hakusui (魄睡, Soul Sleep) in two rapid attacks. A victim may not be able to tell whether they were attacked from the front or the back because of the technique's speed, and even an outside observer may find it impossible to tell what the movements are.
Technique Name: Utsusemi (空蝉, Cast-Off Cicada Shell) Description: The practitioner moves at great speed to avoid an attack, leaving an afterimage which can appear to have taken damage.
Technique Name: Speed Clones Description: The practitioner creates at least 15 clones of themselves at once using Shunpo. While they are indistinguishable from the user's true self and mimic their movements, the clones do not last long.
⌈Hakuda Techniques⌉
// Technique Name: Tesshō (鉄掌, Iron Palm) Description: An open palm strike which can effortlessly shatter a Hollow's head with a single strike.
Technique Name: Sandbag Beat (サンドバッグ・ビート, Sandobaggu Bīto) Description: The practitioner performs multiple extremely fast strikes, causing aggravated damage to a target. The technique is powerful enough to shatter a Menos Grande's mask and utterly destroy its body.
Technique Name: Kagamibiraki (鏡開, Mirror Opening) Description: After puncturing their target with the tips of their fingers, the practitioner rips their opponent in half through sheer physical strength.
Technique Name: Ikkotsu (一骨, Single Bone) Description: A powerful punch which can destroy much of the target's abdomen, send them flying along a city street, and throw them through a building.
Technique Name: Sōkotsu (双骨, Double Bone Description: A powerful, two-fisted punch used which can totally destroy an opponent in one blow.
Technique Name: Oni Dekopin (鬼デコピン, Oni Headpoke) Description: Pulling a finger back against their thumb, the practitioner flicks it at an opponent. The blow carries enough physical force to send the opponent flying a considerable distance away and crashing through multiple physical constructions
⌈Zanjutsu Techniques⌉
// Technique Name: Agitowari (顎割, Chin/Jaw Splitting) Description: The practitioner bisects an opponent from the jaw down the length of the body with a single sword strike.
Technique Name: Ryōdan (両断, Bisection) Description: Grasping his or her sword with both hands, the practitioner brings it down with enough force to cut an opponent in half down the middle.
Technique Name: Hitotsume: Nadegiri (一つ目・撫で斬り, The First: Killing Stroke) Description: A precision cut of extreme force and speed which can casually slice through large, multi-story high opponents protected by steel skin. This slash is so precise and swift, its victims are not even aware of it until after it has taken place.
Technique Name: Senmaioroshi (千枚卸, Thousand-Page Wholesale) Description: Multiple extremely fast blade movements take place, shredding a target into pieces.
⌈Hado⌉
// Spell Name: Sōren Sōkatsui (双漣蒼火墜, Twin Lotus Blue Fire, Crash Down) Number: 73 Incantation: Ye lord! Mask of blood and flesh, all creation, flutter of wings, ye who bears the name of Man! On the wall of blue flame, inscribe a twin lotus. In the abyss of conflagration, wait at the far heavens." Description: An advanced form of Sōkatsui, it has twice the effectiveness. The practitioner generates blue spiritual energy with his/her index and middle fingers. Once that energy is gathered the practitioner can make a push motion using the palms of both hands to push the gathered energy away toward the target in a concentrated blast.
// Spell Name: Shō (衝, Thrust) Number: 01 Incantation: Unknown Description: The practitioner points at his/her target with his/her index finger, a small amount of energy is dispelled from the tip of the index fighter with enough force to thrust a considerable amount of kinetic force at a target causing the target to be pushed back a few feet from the caster.
// Spell Name: Shakkahō (赤火砲, Red Fire Cannon) Number: 31 Incantation: "Ye lord! Mask of blood and flesh, all creation, flutter of wings, ye who bears the name of Man! Inferno and pandemonium, the sea barrier surges, march on to the south!" Description: The user, generating high-temperature flames, discharges it from both hands or the finger, in the form of an orb (small, medium, or large depending on the power used. The destructive power released by the blast can vary between a simple explosion to a pillar of energy. In both instances, the spell causes concussive as well as burn damage.
⌈Bakudo⌉
// Spell Name: Seki (斥, Repulse) Number: 08 Incantation: Unknown Description: The practitioner generates an orb of light blue energy, which not only blocks attacks, but repels whatever strikes it.
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⌈Personality⌉ To his closes friends (the original captains and lieutenants) his is respectful, kind and caring. But to other people who aren't his friends yet, he is cold-hearted, and doesn't like anyone.
⌈Likes⌉ // Nice people // Ladies // Good food // Peace
⌈Dislikes⌉ // Jerks // people who disturb the peace // Hollow who don't have intellect // People who attack for no valid reason
⌈Fears/Phobias⌉ He really doesn't have a fear
⌈Goal(s)⌉ To make a difference in the world and have a family
⌈Biography⌉ Not much is know about his past life. He was a well respected commander, the king didn't want him to go to war. He told the king if he didn't go, then who would protect the kingdom. He took his mosted warrior, which was about three thousand, and fought the war. He died by getting his heart ripped out in a war 1400 used ago. The warriors kept fighting for revenge of their commander. In spirit form he watched his watched them burn his body on pile of logs with his weapons and the weapons of his enemies. He also watched the kingdom fall. When the deal with eradicating all the hollows he didn't say anything about the idea of dropping bombs on them. Because he didn't want to offend the commander. Plus being a shinigami captain was different then leading a army. He felt embarrassed, but he asked the other captains to help with something he didn't know about. He took a liking to shikai and bankai training. Fighting is second nature to him, he is a foster son/brother, warrior, prince and peace keeper.
⌈Theme⌉ I will not B.O.W by Breaking Benjamin
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BLEACH ▶ Catastrophic Calamity
Fenava
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Posted: Fri Jan 13, 2017 12:40 pm
Haraaaa
I hope you find everything okay. If I do have to adjust stuff, please let me know. By the way your character seems interesting.
Posted: Sat Jan 14, 2017 9:09 pm
Let's do this!
>> ⌈Hoho Proficiency⌉ ▼tew ▼ ▼ ▽ ▽ May wanna take a look at that love. xD
>> Alignment is more of [Chaotic Good, True Neutral, Lawful Evil] like that.
>> I would change the info about your zanpaktou dear. You are a Captain afterall, so it is assumed that you should know something about your Zanpaktou Spirit.
>> I need more description on High speed regeneration passive ability.
>> Also for his Shikai, what does the leather jacket do if your spirit is a neko and people feel grim reaper's scythes to their neck? Your shikai, zanpaktou spirit and abilities have to correlate with one another, they all seem like three completely different things hun.
>> And I hope you do know you can acquire more shikai abilities, especially since you are an Original Gotei 13 captain [Due to your age]
>> Also, your Zanpaktou spirit doesn't change, your zanpaktou as in your actual blade. Does it turn into another weapon?
>> I recommend for a new passive ability for your bankai. I mean, you kind of already share so much with your Zanpaktou spirit...
>> ⌈Shikai Technique #3⌉ Nefirimushīrudo :: How big is the shield? What can it block?
>> What is the theme of your attacks? Angels/Devils? Because you have other abilities that don't fall under that category hun.
>> If stats will be enhanced, by how many stats exactly?
>> You are the Kenpachi... You can have far more than just 4 zanjutsu skills love.
>> I don't know if your personality correlates with what a Kenpachi would be...
>> And for a Kenpachi, you have some Kaido. Remember: Division 11 see that as a weak thing, as in Kido in general. Now, you can have Kido- but Idk if Kaido would work here.
>> At your age, you would be an Original Gotei 13 captain, you wouldn't be challenging anyone because you would be the very first captain. Head over to the RP Rules topic in the Information Forum. And your bio needs to be a bit longer than that.
Hey, if you need help with this profile- I see potential with this character, but it needs a lot of fixing man. PM me or quote me if you need help fixing up this character, because I can see him being really bad a** with a lot of fixing.
Nephilim is half demon and half angel (originally), so you could it's the grey area.
I leave the techniques on shikai and bankai empty, because by the time I get to them I run out of ideas.
I know my character can have more than four, the rest either don't fit or they don't sound interesting. (Don't get me wrong I read them all)
Also I don't know what to put bankai passive ability. Characters have sides we don't know about.
Haraaaa
Posted: Sun Jan 15, 2017 10:26 am
Fenava
Nephilim is half demon and half angel (originally), so you could it's the grey area.
I leave the techniques on shikai and bankai empty, because by the time I get to them I run out of ideas.
I know my character can have more than four, the rest either don't fit or they don't sound interesting. (Don't get me wrong I read them all)
Also I don't know what to put bankai passive ability. Characters have sides we don't know about.
Haraaaa
Alright, but the abilities, your spirit for your zanpaktou, and what else I talked about all have to like make sense with Nephilim-based powers. What does a shield have to do with that?
And if you don't know what to write, you could ask me for help rather than just leaving it empty.
And for passive ability, considering how old he is, there should be some idea about what's he is like.
Now, since your character is between the ages of 1000-1500, that means that he was an original member of the Gotei 13, but you would know that since that was in the RP RULES topic.
Now, since your character is between the ages of 1000-1500, that means that he was an original member of the Gotei 13, but you would know that since that was in the RP RULES topic.
Now, since your character is between the ages of 1000-1500, that means that he was an original member of the Gotei 13, but you would know that since that was in the RP RULES topic.
Now, do you still wish for him to be 11th division captain? Because his personality didn't scream "KENPACHI!"
Yes I did right before the rules.
Yes I do want him to the 11 division captain Kenpachi, but for some reason I always imagined he had a softer side that he rarely show.
P.S power's out at my place, using my phone.
Yikes sorry about your power But based on what you wrote in your personality, it doesn't sound like it. Add a little more substance to your personality. :U
