I am writing a manga

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would anyone like to hear about the plot and give constructive criticism/ ideas?  

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Hey, my friend is making one too!
Yes, I'd love to hear about it.  

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KatanaXD

Hey, my friend is making one too!
Yes, I'd love to hear about it.

actually im making three. the one i posted about is a time warped universe where its medieval, modern and futuristic at the same time. the main character is named Luke Abrell and he is an efreet/human hybrid who is trying to lay low and not get executed on the spot. there used to be a 4 person tribunal who directed the laws, an efreet, an elvish, an undine, and a human were appointed to direct and lead the great nation, but the efreet leader tried to overthrow the other leaders and as consequence, all egrets, hybrids or wholes, were to be executed on the spot. Luke, being a hybrid, has to dye his hair black, and wear contacts to disguise his appearance. and not get executed. after a while he finds out that the other three leaders were tricked by the main antagonist into thinking the efreets were rebelling, and so Luke tries to clear his species' name.  

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KatanaXD

Hey, my friend is making one too!
Yes, I'd love to hear about it.

actually im making three. the one i posted about is a time warped universe where its medieval, modern and futuristic at the same time. the main character is named Luke Abrell and he is an efreet/human hybrid who is trying to lay low and not get executed on the spot. there used to be a 4 person tribunal who directed the laws, an efreet, an elvish, an undine, and a human were appointed to direct and lead the great nation, but the efreet leader tried to overthrow the other leaders and as consequence, all egrets, hybrids or wholes, were to be executed on the spot. Luke, being a hybrid, has to dye his hair black, and wear contacts to disguise his appearance. and not get executed. after a while he finds out that the other three leaders were tricked by the main antagonist into thinking the efreets were rebelling, and so Luke tries to clear his species' name.

Dafuq's an efreet?  

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usually an efreet is know as a fire spirit, but in my manga it is a human-like species but with blood red hair and red eyes.