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Sakura Kintari
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PostPosted: Thu Jul 25, 2013 11:23 pm
I guess I'm the first to post here. I'm more a short story type, but occasionally I dabble it poems. I wrote this one not long ago, and would like to hear some thoughts/feedback on it.




String Theory

He invented animals from flowers
Flowers from nothing
And nothing from everything.
She created light from sound
Sound from silence
and silence from cacophonies.
Everything dreams itself into existence
From dreams spring reality
and reality is only perception.
One to one
eye to eye
A thousand realities colliding and spinning
A millions faiths ebbing and flowing
growing like flowers from nothing.  
PostPosted: Thu Aug 01, 2013 10:10 am
thats really good  

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Sakura Kintari
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PostPosted: Sun Aug 11, 2013 12:15 am
lostdeathblackrose
thats really good


Thanks!  
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