So, I'm writing a RP scenario for a friend and having some problems with one part. I'm wondering if anyone has something they want to pitch in, spot an error I was too lazy to see, or help in any way....

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Glancing around at his so called 'team mates' joking around the SHIELD table, Tony lost it, " I thought we were a team? You know, the Avengers? I know I'm not a team player-"

Steve fails to cover his laugh with a cough, causing Tony to turn on him," You have no room to judge me, Capsicle. I had to fight the terrorist, the Mandarin, alone. Where were you when your President's jet was attacked? Not on a SHIELD aircraft, trying to help me.You could of had jumped out with a parachute or two and helped." Focusing his attention on all of the group, " Where were all of you when he decided to light up Malibu? You showed everyone he reached that he was right: There are no such thing as heroes. "

Nick Fury chose that moment to start to talk,"Stark, Agents Barton and -"

" I don't give a damn if your agents were in Egypt, putting down riots. You did not have them here, protecting American life's," After scratching his temple, he jabbed Fury in the chest, " Weren't you the one who wanted us to team up and fight the battles that no one else can? I think having to save thirteen high ranking officials of the American government, fighting Extremis controlled civilians, and then facing a terrorist who kidnapped the one thing I had left to fight for? Oh, and not having any one die while doing that. Sounds like an easy team effort."

Fury was about to speak, but Steve beat him," But you did beat the Mandarin, Stark! You saved thousands, including the President! You don't need to blow up on us ! Hell, you even found a way to better yourself with that Extremis invention. How did you lose?"

At that point Tony broke, " I lost Pepper! She's ******** dead because I chose to take care of a thousand others. Because I let my second chance to live be one to save others. Because of me being Iron Man, she and our creation is gone." Tears, the one thing the other Avengers never thought he could produce, was cascading down his face.