Training field

[Space_Fukker]

"Jenna, Nice to meet'cha",Jenna said, putting her sword back in its sheath "I'm terribly sorry to cut our chat short, but my violin is not going to play itself",she added, giving an apologetic smile and walked off  

[Space_Fukker]

Kagami throws a shuriken at the target, barely missing the center "[these words are too inappropriate for use in this role play] ",she swears as she retrieves it. "Why can't I get it right?!"  

[jace180013]

A shadow figure entered the room silently and stood watching. A voice spoke from a corner. "You're to angry, calm down, relax, take a deep breath. Now analyze your target. Take careful notice of your surroundings, that fan over there is creating a wind in the room. Feel the force of the wind and direction, and be sure to adjust accordingly. Breath in deeply before you throw and release as you release the weapon. Give it a shot." The voice grew silent and awaited the next attempt. She knew that this girl could achieve the goal easily.

(((OOC suggestion for the swearing. Maybe try something along these lines. I will use my character Jace as an example.
Jace threw his fist at the ground in anger as he mumbled curses at the target.
or
Jace threw his hands up and began on a rant. "Damn it all! Why the F*** can I not get this piece of S*** to work!

Though I am not to picky on throwing swear words in your post. Just so long as you don't over do it.)))  

[sinji sempai]

-walks through training field looking around- man everything has changed -walks to the main school building-  

[Space_Fukker]

jace180013

She sighs haughtily and tries it only to find that the shadow figure is right. She hits the center and squeals with joy. "Thankyouthankyouthankyou",she exclaims, running her words together.

((OOC: it's an inside joke I got used to using instead of typing swear words, does it bug you? I'm sorry if it does....)))  

[jace180013]

Kagami Hatake

jace180013

"You are welcome dear, I just could not let such skill go to waste. Do not let your pride and anger get the best of you, control them and keep a level head. This is the key to any fight." Mystery spoke calmly refusing to reveal it's true form the shadow simply changed to look like a smiley face to show its approval of the results.

(((OOC No, doesn't bug me at all biggrin You can relax. I am very loose on the rules here for the most part. So just have fun and make yourself at home. I simply wanted to be sure you knew that swearing is allowed her to an extent. If you ever have any questions or concerns feel free to let me know. I might be the temp captain, but I am really no different than the other members aside from the responsibilities and the title I get to have )))  

[Space_Fukker]

"Okay", she says with a cheeky grin, mostly seen in her eyes because of her mask, but still a grin nonetheless while slight curiosity wanders over the part of her mind that wonders what this stranger looks like

jace180013

 

[jace180013]

The shadow figure returned to normal. "Remember this lesson well dear, for it could be your only salvation in times to come." The shadow became solid and tangible. It appeared as a manikin of a strong man. "Battles are not fought with strength alone, but wisdom and knowledge if you lack these things you are doomed to death on the battle field."  

[Space_Fukker]

jace180013

She noded slowly "I'll make sure to remember that",she said, 'I can learn so much from this guy' she thought with a grin.

Patched up your verbs. I marked them in red just a few little things, to help improve our ability to roleplay. using proper tenses of verbs is important. If you would like anymore tips let me know.  

[jace180013]

The shadow whisped around the room. "Yes you can learn much from dear, though your thoughts will not be safe from me. I am here, there, and everywhere. Inside your head is among these things." Mystery again shaped its shadowy body into a big floating smiley face, as it awaited her next response.  

[Space_Fukker]

Unable to comprehend what just happened, her jaw fell open as if she was about to say something, the words that fell out being "What the f*ck?" Upon realization on what she said, she covered her mouth in embarrassment. "I'm sorry", she squeaked.

(("Better? Although, I do have to say, if you wanted me to fix my errors you could have told me so", Kagami says haughtily, flipping some hair behind her shoulder))  

[StarEmpress_9]

-speaking to myself- to think... this place used to be the center of action...  

[jace180013]

StarEmpress_9

-speaking to myself- to think... this place used to be the center of action...

Jace walked through the doors of the training area. "Man this place used to be full of people training now its all dusty." He said with a sigh as he whipped some dust off the floor. "So guys think we should clean it up?" He seemingly asked empty room. "I thought you might agree let's light this place up and have some fun." Jace smirked as he drew his sword and opened all the doors and windows. "Time to shine boys, he said with a smile as he spun the hilt around his hand. This slight spin created a huge gust of wind that whisked all of the dust into the air, and then out the windows. "Well I would say that went better than we planned." He again spoke to the empty room. He then walked over to the control and began turning the lights on.