My Art Arena Submission - The Search

[Spike Salad]

Hey,

Feel free to rate and comment my submission, any input would be really appreciated whether positive or negative.

My Submission

Thanks

[Lahrette]

This is short but amazing. I really like your use of metaphors and you have a really unique way of looking at things. The spacing between paragraphs seems to vary, but it's a small problem that shouldn't affect your ratings too much. I think your catagorisation of this is interesting too, at first I thought it was a mistake, but on reflection I can understand your decision of putting this in non-fiction, even if it makes it harder to find.

Oh, you might want to change the topic title to 'Writing Arena Submission' instead, because I glanced at the title and almost didn't read this because I though it was pictures, not words and therefore in the wrong forum razz

[corazon ilusionado]

Please help me! )':

[cloudedguardian]

I'll read yours, you read mine?
Rose, Diamond, Pentacle, Demon
I've only got two votes so far... I don't think i can win with just that! XD

[cloudedguardian]

QuarterBlode

Hey,

Feel free to rate and comment my submission, any input would be really appreciated whether positive or negative.

My Submission

Thanks

its really amazing... I'm giving you a five~!

[II-Sith-II]

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