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Lately I have not been able to get many ratings or comments from people. It would be wonderful if anybody would be willing to take their time to read and critique my two newest poetry entries in the Writing Arena.

Sweeping Sands

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I commented and rated! Mind r/c'ing back?

Sonnet

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I has posted comment! biggrin
I decided to revive this thread instead of starting a new one since it'd seem kind of pointless to have more than one thread about my arena entries. Anyway, I've only gotten a couple of ratings on this poem and would appreciate it if someone were to critique it ( . . . . There is incentive for the first person to write a thorough critique wink )

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