i usually write doom and gloom poetry well here is an example i wroet this by the way!!!
Gone
You took me by surprise,
I thought I had the world,
But it was just a façide,
Now I’m just a lonely girl.
I wake up in the morning,
I wish it was a dream,
Now as I feel the pain,
All I can do is scream.
Every day I see you,
My heart bursts with pain,
You turn around and look at me like you used to,
Then you show me your back and laugh with your friends.
I wish I could leave my body behind,
Soar away in the sky,
But its not that simple,
Cause I know I still love you,
And I don’t want to let you go.
Empty,
Just a shell,
Pain bursts inside,
I’m in hell,
Why cant things be like they used to,
I’ll never let go,
You were my best friend,
Now all you are is gone.
now u c wut i mean and i luv that poem cuase it shows my real emotion, wut i was feeling at the time. that was bout my friend who has recently deserted me and i wrote that a couple days after she confronted me and evr since then i havent really had any more freinds. i pretty much ditched evry1 i knew cuase she was my best freind i thought we always would b bestfriends. it really hurt me when she left me. so right now im sortof really looking 4 some1 2 talk 2. crying