LadyNaena
Lol, now I'm curious. I do so love Stephen King^^.
I think what I like most about Collins' writing is her ability to create realistic characters we genuinely become attached to and her pacing. It's spot on, I think, which is something I really admire. I have a problem with pacing ._.,
Hah, it's certainly worth a look-through then!
I wouldn't worry a great deal about pacing with your first draft. If you think of writing in terms of drawing, then what you're doing now is a the messy sketch/outline. It doesn't really resemble what the finished product will be, but it let's you get everything down that you need to see to visually work it into whatever you have envisioned.