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[The Nervous Type]

The head seems small and you lost some stuff in the sketch that I'd like to see in the final! Under the eyes and the hand thing! Otherwise really good!

[Just Pogo]

Okay, I think I figured out what is bothering me about the eye/forehead area. The profile of her face is giving the impression that she's facing more to the side, while her eye looks like she would be facing a little bit more forward. Maybe make her eye a little bigger. Iunno, try looking at somebody's face from that angle, and see how the eye is positioned on their face. I hope I helped.

[kaze_no_sakura]

It's good, it's just the eyes that need a little work, and the forehead.