clothing designs WIP

[Hopu-chan]

okay so i've been doing some clothes design and I would be extremely grateful for any critique!
1. military trench coat

2. visual kei inspired isometric coat


link to my deviantart: http://bleachluva2.deviantart.com

edit: changed the picture of the military coat. unfinished dragon scale pattern

[Toaster Penguin]

I love them both. I think the fishnet one would look great in dark teal, too.

[Bitterwing]

Wow I really love the visual Kei one, I would buy that in a heartbeat. I think the studs were an especially good idea for it as well~

[Hopu-chan]

Bitterwing

Wow I really love the visual Kei one, I would buy that in a heartbeat. I think the studs were an especially good idea for it as well~

Gi-Gi Rider

I love them both. I think the fishnet one would look great in dark teal, too.

Thank you very much for the feedback! Is there anything that you think could be improved or anything I could add? also, I changed the picture so now it has the unfinished dragon scale pattern on

[Toaster Penguin]

Perhaps a V-neck on the Kei.

Rogue Moon Rose

Bitterwing

Wow I really love the visual Kei one, I would buy that in a heartbeat. I think the studs were an especially good idea for it as well~

Gi-Gi Rider

I love them both. I think the fishnet one would look great in dark teal, too.

Thank you very much for the feedback! Is there anything that you think could be improved or anything I could add? also, I changed the picture so now it has the unfinished dragon scale pattern on

[Bitterwing]

Well I'm not very good at clothes designing but I personally think some studding on the pants or maybe a contrasting colour somewhere might make them seem like a bit more of a pair? But again Im no good with clothes design sweatdrop