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Raphael Korland

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Post: 13816503_1 created on Tue, 23 May 2006 17:29:21 +0000
Posted: Tue, 23 May 2006 17:29:21 +0000

Haven't used this site for ages, but I wanted to get someones opinion on this.

Green is the colour of nature, but also of envy
Of plague, and of rot
These are the greens that are in my hurt
Hurting me with their pain

Peace I can never feel
Or love, or happiness
Eternally I am hurting
Torn apart by pain

Red is passion, or blood
Yellow is sunlight, or pus
I see these as they flow down my arms
Seeping from my body

Forever we suffer, pain our companion
Unending suffering our only friend
Closed off to others, to love
Kept to ourselves, to pain

Ice forms in my heart
Never reaching out to another
Growing colder each day
Sealed off from love

Torment tears me apart inside
Unending torture without reprieve
Pain is all that is within
I feel that I am dying slowly

Death will be a relief

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Post: 13816503_2 created on Tue, 23 May 2006 19:36:20 +0000
Posted: Tue, 23 May 2006 19:36:20 +0000

it was aight. it could use some work though

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Post: 13816503_3 created on Wed, 24 May 2006 17:15:59 +0000
Posted: Wed, 24 May 2006 17:15:59 +0000

Bump

Conri Fionn

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Post: 13816503_4 created on Wed, 24 May 2006 17:46:50 +0000
Posted: Wed, 24 May 2006 17:46:50 +0000

I have a name for it.
Razor blades from my Arms

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Post: 13816503_5 created on Wed, 24 May 2006 18:19:58 +0000
Posted: Wed, 24 May 2006 18:19:58 +0000

Or how about:

The Color of Obvious

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Post: 13816503_6 created on Wed, 24 May 2006 20:03:01 +0000
Posted: Wed, 24 May 2006 20:03:01 +0000

Follow My Lied

Or how about:

The Color of Obvious

lmao!! took the words right out of my mouth

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Post: 13816503_7 created on Wed, 24 May 2006 20:08:28 +0000
Posted: Wed, 24 May 2006 20:08:28 +0000

Caramel_Cutie14

it was aight. it could use some work though

^ You obvously don't know talent when you see it!^

Don't you dare change it in anyway! I love it just the way it is. I hope you don't mind, but I'm going to print it off for inspiration for later on in my own poetry career.

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