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ilmusic

TERRlBLY

ilmusic

Ugh, couldn't stop. Your invo is fun.
Maybe you will like some of these emotion_awesome

I'm glad you like my inventory lol.

for the first one: I'm not sure how i feel about those legs with that body, maybe try a different pair of legs?

for the second one: change the top maybe? and try an arm pose?

for the third one: change the eyes maybe? and add gold to the upper body? just like little specs.

for the forth: change the eyes, take off the wings / change the wings, and the hair and maybe the make up?

for the fifth: change the eyes and make up?

i really like the 6th one, so you don't have to change that c:

Seriously stumped with this one sweatdrop


Went outside your invo a wee bit for this one




Sorry to bombard you with so many edits 'xD
Hope some of them hit the mark~

[ilmusic]

Azure Ageha

ilmusic

Hey Muse, muse! I got a number 2 for you!
Username: Azure Ageha
Submissions:

1. 2. 3.

Anything else?:

Hi, yeah it's completely fine to post multiple avis of the same base in one post!

for the first one: I don't really have any criticisms..

For the second one: Again, no feedback for now.

For the third: Change the lips, and maybe a more... calmed down hair? lol

[ilmusic]

Azure Ageha

ilmusic

Hey Muse, muse! I got a number 3 for you!
Username: Azure Ageha
Submissions:

1. 2. 3. 4.

Anything else: I hope it's okay to post few avis in same post since it the same base. sweatdrop

Sorry I don't really have much to say about yours, they're lovely on their own.

For the last one: try different legs/ shoes? the blue is a little off from the mint greenish.

[ilmusic]

DerseKnightDave

ilmusic

Hey Muse, muse! I got a number 1 for you!
Username:
Submissions:

Anything else? This was quite fun:

hey, so the colors, in my opinion for the body and the whites / hair don't really work together.

Maybe try changing the dress/bodice/body to a lighter color (maybe pink and white?)

or try keeping the dress / bodice / body to a darker color (maybe black and blue?)

[ilmusic]

DerseKnightDave

ilmusic

Hey Muse, muse! I got a number 2 for you!
Username:
Submissions:

Anything else?:

Hey, the hair doesnt really match with the body or the face, try changing the body and keeping the hair?

[ilmusic]

DerseKnightDave

ilmusic

Hey Muse, muse! I got a number 3 for you!
Username:
Submissions:

Anything else?:

This I did like more,

try changing the dress to match the hair blue more though?

[ilmusic]

BubleBlue

ilmusic

Hey Muse, muse! I got a number 1 for you!
Username: BubleBlue
Submissions:

Anything else?: none

Hi, first off, your avi is lovely.

secondly, maybe add a hat to the first one. Add a jacket, or a different arm mod to the second one, and try adding lips to the second one(This would fall into catagory 4 by the way, because it technically isn't made from the base that i required). Thirdly, change the eyes and add lips to the third one?

[ilmusic]

l o l r a m e n

ilmusic

Hey Muse, muse! I got a number 1 for you!
Username:l o l r a m e n
Submissions:

Anything else?:

Hi, I'm sorry that I don't have any feedback, but that avatar isn't really my style. It's lovely, but I'm not sure how i feel about it aside from that ^^;

[ilmusic]

touch the butt

ilmusic

Hey Muse, muse! I got a number 2 for you!
Username: touch the butt
Submissions:

Anything else?: If you have feedback then I'd love to work on it more.

Hi, I think that the head looks lovely, but the body doesn't really match it in my eyes. I love the theme but maybe try changing the body to match it color wise more?

[ilmusic]

TERRlBLY

ilmusic

TERRlBLY

ilmusic

Ugh, couldn't stop. Your invo is fun.
Maybe you will like some of these emotion_awesome

I'm glad you like my inventory lol.

for the first one: I'm not sure how i feel about those legs with that body, maybe try a different pair of legs?

for the second one: change the top maybe? and try an arm pose?

for the third one: change the eyes maybe? and add gold to the upper body? just like little specs.

for the forth: change the eyes, take off the wings / change the wings, and the hair and maybe the make up?

for the fifth: change the eyes and make up?

i really like the 6th one, so you don't have to change that c:

Seriously stumped with this one sweatdrop


Went outside your invo a wee bit for this one




Sorry to bombard you with so many edits 'xD
Hope some of them hit the mark~

Hey, yeah I really like some of those. Thanks for submitting, and feel free to continue!

Oh and by the way, I really love your avi <3

[TERRlBLY]

ilmusic

TERRlBLY

ilmusic

TERRlBLY

ilmusic

Ugh, couldn't stop. Your invo is fun.
Maybe you will like some of these emotion_awesome

I'm glad you like my inventory lol.

for the first one: I'm not sure how i feel about those legs with that body, maybe try a different pair of legs?

for the second one: change the top maybe? and try an arm pose?

for the third one: change the eyes maybe? and add gold to the upper body? just like little specs.

for the forth: change the eyes, take off the wings / change the wings, and the hair and maybe the make up?

for the fifth: change the eyes and make up?

i really like the 6th one, so you don't have to change that c:

Seriously stumped with this one sweatdrop


Went outside your invo a wee bit for this one




Sorry to bombard you with so many edits 'xD
Hope some of them hit the mark~

Hey, yeah I really like some of those. Thanks for submitting, and feel free to continue!

Oh and by the way, I really love your avi <3

GOOD BECAUSE I SPENT ALL MY MONIES ON IT *Cries
lol thanks.
And I will continue~ c:
Maybe later tonight or tomorrow though, I need to eat, and depending on how much I eat I might have to sleep after emotion_awesome

[jjdjjdjd]

ilmusic

tamagotchi babysitter

ilmusic

Hey Muse, muse! I got a number 4 for you!
Username:tamagotchi babysitter
Submissions:

Hey, interesting, try changing the legs?

???

[Azure Ageha]

ilmusic

Azure Ageha

ilmusic

Hey Muse, muse! I got a number 2 for you!
Username: Azure Ageha
Submissions:

1. 2. 3.

Anything else?:

Hi, yeah it's completely fine to post multiple avis of the same base in one post!

for the first one: I don't really have any criticisms..

For the second one: Again, no feedback for now.

For the third: Change the lips, and maybe a more... calmed down hair? lol

The edited: I think this will be better if we use La Belle Cygne but since it not in tektek yet, I use La belle Chantause.
New entry:

[Azure Ageha]

ilmusic

Azure Ageha

ilmusic

Hey Muse, muse! I got a number 3 for you!
Username: Azure Ageha
Submissions:

1. 2. 3. 4.

Anything else: I hope it's okay to post few avis in same post since it the same base. sweatdrop

Sorry I don't really have much to say about yours, they're lovely on their own.

For the last one: try different legs/ shoes? the blue is a little off from the mint greenish.

1. 2. 3.
Hope any of them better.XD

[Xx Neon Starlight xX]

too dead to attempt tonight but posting as a note-to-self cos this looks hella fun