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Post: 97572519_106 created on Wed, 19 Aug 2015 20:08:56 +0000
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MissxRed

lol
your first post was finnnnnnnnne

i am trying to get off my lazy a-s
so i can get on my laptop and reply to
roleplays x-x
but i'm soooooo comfyyyy on the couch ;-;

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Post: 97572519_107 created on Thu, 20 Aug 2015 01:41:16 +0000
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oooo

made amie on dreamselfy

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Post: 97572519_108 created on Thu, 20 Aug 2015 13:18:36 +0000
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rainbowzcolor

oooo

made amie on dreamselfy

I made Andi too. It turned out "okay"... razz Here

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Post: 97572519_109 created on Thu, 20 Aug 2015 15:29:06 +0000
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rainbowzcolor

oooo

made amie on dreamselfy

I made Andi too. It turned out "okay"... razz Here

You guys suck... D:
I spent like half an hour on it! Damn it!
Iliza < Doesn't look half bad but yeh... Not as I imagine her.

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Post: 97572519_110 created on Thu, 20 Aug 2015 16:27:08 +0000
Posted: Thu, 20 Aug 2015 16:27:08 +0000

As a note, I'll stop the linearity soon. I just want to deliver some plot-relevant info and then you folks will be free to start wandering around and stuff.

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Post: 97572519_111 created on Sat, 22 Aug 2015 00:59:52 +0000
Posted: Sat, 22 Aug 2015 00:59:52 +0000

Figure I should probs introduce myself, so for anyone who cares, I'm GeriatricWordmonger, and I'll be playing as Liam Eschert, Toma's younger brother. Hello, and good to meet you all!

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Post: 97572519_112 created on Sat, 22 Aug 2015 05:51:14 +0000
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GeriatricWordmonger

heyo
the name's rainbow c:
how are yaaaa?

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Post: 97572519_113 created on Sat, 22 Aug 2015 07:21:29 +0000
Posted: Sat, 22 Aug 2015 07:21:29 +0000

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ugu
where did scidds go o-o
hope she's okayyy

anyways
might reply tomorrow if snap does
cuz if he doesn't
then yolo man
//leaves him
nah jk im not that mean

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Post: 97572519_114 created on Sat, 22 Aug 2015 07:50:59 +0000
Posted: Sat, 22 Aug 2015 07:50:59 +0000

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amie vy
extra info on amie just in case u nuggets love her lmao
w.i.p obviously
still unfinished ; ^;

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Post: 97572519_115 created on Sat, 22 Aug 2015 15:13:10 +0000
Posted: Sat, 22 Aug 2015 15:13:10 +0000

I added the NPCs' appearances to the front page for easy reference, and a small blurb about the Marigold Corporation. A reminder that if any of you want to add some stuff to develop the world some more, I welcome it.

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Post: 97572519_116 created on Sat, 22 Aug 2015 21:27:57 +0000
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rainbowzcolor

heyo
the name's rainbow c:
how are yaaaa?

I'm quite well, thanks. Nice to make your acquaintance.

Takarashi

I just have a couple of nitpicks about the NPC's really.

First and foremost, you forgot the 'a' in "Toma" when giving his description.

Secondly, the weights you gave for the NPC men seem a bit... Light. 155 isn't that heavy, especially for someone as tall as 6'2" like Toma. Also, muscle weighs more than fat. If he's muscular and lithe, then he's probably in the 175-190 range. If he's broad shouldered and heroic looking, he's probably closer to 215-225. Look up the weights of proffesional sports players for reference, if you'd like. The mayor as well would likely be heavier, probably around 200 lbs.

Again, that's nitpicky.

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Post: 97572519_117 created on Sat, 22 Aug 2015 21:33:29 +0000
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GeriatricWordmonger

I welcome the criticism. I admittedly don't have a good reference of body dimensions, I just try to take my own and upscale them. I'll adjust those. And yeah, got the typo of Toma's name, thanks for the catch.

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Post: 97572519_118 created on Sat, 22 Aug 2015 22:03:37 +0000
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Takarashi

I feel like I'm supposed to be saying you're welcome here, and I suppose you are, but I'm just happy to be able to contribute something. Or rather, I'm happy that me being slightly a**l about something wasn't taken as a personal attack.

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Post: 97572519_119 created on Sat, 22 Aug 2015 22:07:56 +0000
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GeriatricWordmonger

Heh, I get'cha. I'm a bit of an odd person, I guess, in that I'm constantly looking for criticism of my work as opposed to compliments and such. I find that a lot of people have a hard time being honest, to the point that it becomes a detriment (like they won't speak up and such), so it's refreshing when someone actually will point out things that are wrong to me.

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Post: 97572519_120 created on Sat, 22 Aug 2015 22:11:29 +0000
Posted: Sat, 22 Aug 2015 22:11:29 +0000

Takarashi

Thank's me. I'm a professional wrongness pointer-outer. My screen name was going to be "Captain Obvious" but I figured that was taken.

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