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Post: 90387553_1 created on Wed, 12 Feb 2014 18:07:38 +0000
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It's for an outfit design contest for Lightning from FFXIII.
I tried to do it mafia-themed but maintain a FF sensibility.
I feel like I failed, but that's for you guys to tell me. I know you want to.

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Post: 90387553_2 created on Wed, 12 Feb 2014 18:09:52 +0000
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Post: 90387553_3 created on Wed, 12 Feb 2014 18:20:42 +0000
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Post: 90387553_4 created on Wed, 12 Feb 2014 18:23:13 +0000
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Anatomy is off, and for a Final Fantasy Design it's too simple, and not detailed enough.

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Post: 90387553_5 created on Wed, 12 Feb 2014 18:24:35 +0000
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Anatomy is off, and for a Final Fantasy Design it's too simple, and not detailed enough.

Okay! Where do you think it's off, in particular?

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Post: 90387553_6 created on Wed, 12 Feb 2014 18:27:43 +0000
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Anatomy is off, and for a Final Fantasy Design it's too simple, and not detailed enough.

Okay! Where do you think it's off, in particular?

Head, facial features, and his neck is far too skinny.
He seems to be all face, and no head structure, the facial features are too large.

Also the jaw line is shaped oddly.

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Post: 90387553_7 created on Wed, 12 Feb 2014 18:40:37 +0000
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The Black Horned

Head, facial features, and his neck is far too skinny.
He seems to be all face, and no head structure, the facial features are too large.

Also the jaw line is shaped oddly.

Noted, noted, and noted! Thank you!
And tis a lady, but I suppose if that's mistaken then that says something poor about the art as well. XD
Thanks for taking the time!

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Post: 90387553_8 created on Wed, 12 Feb 2014 18:41:26 +0000
Posted: Wed, 12 Feb 2014 18:41:26 +0000

doesnt look like final fantasy xD

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Post: 90387553_9 created on Wed, 12 Feb 2014 18:42:39 +0000
Posted: Wed, 12 Feb 2014 18:42:39 +0000

I love it! emotion_bigheart 4laugh

Now draw me. 3nodding

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Post: 90387553_10 created on Wed, 12 Feb 2014 18:43:04 +0000
Posted: Wed, 12 Feb 2014 18:43:04 +0000

I'll give you a 8/10.

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Post: 90387553_11 created on Wed, 12 Feb 2014 23:57:42 +0000
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The Black Horned

Head, facial features, and his neck is far too skinny.
He seems to be all face, and no head structure, the facial features are too large.

Also the jaw line is shaped oddly.

Noted, noted, and noted! Thank you!
And tis a lady, but I suppose if that's mistaken then that says something poor about the art as well. XD
Thanks for taking the time!

No problem, and good luck.

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Post: 90387553_12 created on Wed, 12 Feb 2014 23:59:36 +0000
Posted: Wed, 12 Feb 2014 23:59:36 +0000

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I love it! emotion_bigheart 4laugh

Now draw me. 3nodding

You're definitely on my list~
This deadline just popped up super unexpectedly. ;___;

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