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Post: 87172687_1 created on Tue, 30 Jul 2013 20:00:49 +0000
Posted: Tue, 30 Jul 2013 20:00:49 +0000

well well well i write a story on my journal (the name is gaia adventure story) so i write 3 chapters but i dont have idea for the chapter 4 and if you want to be in my story comment me back ansd send a pm 3nodding 3nodding

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Post: 87172687_2 created on Tue, 30 Jul 2013 20:02:36 +0000
Posted: Tue, 30 Jul 2013 20:02:36 +0000

What's the story about? You didn't tell us anything about it, so it's hard to help.

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Post: 87172687_3 created on Tue, 30 Jul 2013 20:09:32 +0000
Posted: Tue, 30 Jul 2013 20:09:32 +0000

the story is about a friends that want to save a princesse biggrin basic rpg style

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Post: 87172687_4 created on Tue, 30 Jul 2013 20:12:19 +0000
Posted: Tue, 30 Jul 2013 20:12:19 +0000

and just one thing ice is the is my favorite heart make a best score than me at the dice i will give you 100 gold lol

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Post: 87172687_5 created on Tue, 30 Jul 2013 20:15:22 +0000
Posted: Tue, 30 Jul 2013 20:15:22 +0000

That's one sentence. It's nothing to really go on.

They're trying to save a princess, and what? Who are they? Why do they want to save her? Basics stuff. If you don't have an answer to any of that, answering it should help you find a direction for this story.

joey smyth rolled 20 100-sided dice: 31, 14, 17, 43, 77, 73, 46, 58, 73, 17, 7, 90, 48, 82, 21, 42, 16, 4, 16, 43 Total: 818 (20-2000)

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Post: 87172687_6 created on Wed, 31 Jul 2013 13:03:28 +0000
Posted: Wed, 31 Jul 2013 13:03:28 +0000

if you had read it in my journal it will be faster to understand the main character is joey a wizzard after there is lowiny a hunter tobias a swordmaster the princesse (no fighting style) and cirevu the gunner so in the chapter 3 the princesse get kidnap by a dragon (is name is enejar) so all the friends have to save her read my journal

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joey smyth rolled 20 100-sided dice: 38, 7, 56, 34, 71, 42, 50, 5, 61, 58, 17, 81, 80, 67, 53, 89, 75, 92, 68, 15 Total: 1059 (20-2000)

joey smyth rolled 20 100-sided dice: 31, 14, 17, 43, 77, 73, 46, 58, 73, 17, 7, 90, 48, 82, 21, 42, 16, 4, 16, 43 Total: 818 (20-2000)

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joey smyth rolled 20 100-sided dice: 38, 7, 56, 34, 71, 42, 50, 5, 61, 58, 17, 81, 80, 67, 53, 89, 75, 92, 68, 15 Total: 1059 (20-2000)

joey smyth rolled 20 100-sided dice: 31, 14, 17, 43, 77, 73, 46, 58, 73, 17, 7, 90, 48, 82, 21, 42, 16, 4, 16, 43 Total: 818 (20-2000)

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