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Luke and Sesshomaru from my SW/IY crossover. This is my first time making lines like this, so please, do they (the lines) look okay? If you don't think they do, please give critique.

Also, how should I colour this? Cell shaded, or painted, or what...?

I hope it doesn't look like yaoi... because it's not. *sigh*

Please critique...

I got a comment? Cool.

Well, I guess people can think it's yaoi... I know it's not, and it's not, so let them think whatever.

*sigh* You're right... I'm really trying to work on that, and I'm getting better (compared to how I used to draw Luke...), but I think it'll be awhile before I can make them look like they should. I promise that I'm going to continue to work on that until I can draw them. I mean, EVENTUALLY I'll be able to draw them... until then, I'll have to draw them like this *frustration*

Thanks for your comment heart It's nice to hear from someone!

Well, I can't really draw him in his pretty Tatooine clothes, because this is EU Luke. I understand, though (I needed to look into what they wear in Star Wars anyways, because... I really have no idea what they wear). I'll look around on the internet for someone sort of reference.

Sesshomaru, however, I cannot draw in his Japanese robe things, because in the story itself, he wears modern clothes (clothes from our time, that is). And... ahh, the more I talk about it, the more dorky it sounds. So I'm stopping now.

Thanks again!

I didn't have yaoi in mind when I drew it. The necklace is the connection between these two and their worlds, blah blah, ect, which is why they're both holding onto it. They're holding it in their mouths because I thought it was cute. They love each other... as BROTHERS. Not romantic. Not yaoi.

People will probably interpret it as they want, because that's how most people see pictures that show affection between two men. But this isn't romantic affection.

So people might think it's yaoi... even if a lot of people think that, it's not yaoi. Let them interpret it as they want sweatdrop

gotta agree there. the closest contact brothers make are when they give eachother noogies.

Luke kinka looks like Heero Yuy from Gundam Wing and Sessy, well....

Okay, I get the point. People think it's yaoi. Please trust me, it's not what I intended people to think.

Moving on...

Please, doesn't anyone have ANY critique on the actual lines? Or suggestions on how to colour it?