Skowl
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- Posted: Wed, 09 Feb 2005 09:01:05 +0000
Yorun
Evil Twinkie
I'm new at this so don't be so harsh... sweatdrop
Hey, this verse might come out to be incomplete,
As soon as start that imaginary simple beat,
but you that it needs to be smooth and silky,
To come out to match with my amateur spitting,
I need someting to combust my inner self rapper,
Ignite the burning flames which move my infinite flow,
you know, i might be quite new to this game,
Like a rookie who got drafted from to the NBA,
But I'm not comepletely clueless,
I know how to do this,
I'm know not awful but I know I'm not good,
knowing this just makes me hope could be better.
I know I need a lot of practice. gonk I'm kinda young so I don't have a very good vocabulary.
Hey, this verse might come out to be incomplete,
As soon as start that imaginary simple beat,
but you that it needs to be smooth and silky,
To come out to match with my amateur spitting,
I need someting to combust my inner self rapper,
Ignite the burning flames which move my infinite flow,
you know, i might be quite new to this game,
Like a rookie who got drafted from to the NBA,
But I'm not comepletely clueless,
I know how to do this,
I'm know not awful but I know I'm not good,
knowing this just makes me hope could be better.
I know I need a lot of practice. gonk I'm kinda young so I don't have a very good vocabulary.
If you say that you're not good, don't ever rap again.
Be a man, stand up, device a new plan
And comeback to hit it like a tram
The main point about rappers is that they're cocky
And that they know that they don't suck, see
They fight of attacks with passionate strength like rocky
It's time to show selfconfidence, make a stance
Or piss of, cause you never would've had a chance.
Evil Twinkie keep ya head up, because I'm young too/
Only 13, I got into hiphop while I hung out with my crew/
Though my years are few, I'm trying to emcee and learn/
Though listening and doing seemed quite a huge turn/
Like petrol flying through hell, trying not to get burned/
And when I come to this freeflow sticky to return/
I hope I'm much better, because I dont feel like I've flown/
To the best of my ability/
Because at the moment, that there all that there be.../
how was that for a first time? sweatdrop