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So my friends and I are starting a YouTube group. Yes, I know it's overdone. But whatever.

I want you all to watch our first video and give some feedback. We want to try and make better videos and need a direction to go in

Not bad, though I think the script could have used some tightening-up. I couldn't read the message on the phone when it was displayed -- the camera wasn't close enough and it didn't stay on the shot long enough. You could have also put on some secret agent music as well as the two were heading out, or at least something fitting for their get-ups. While going through the drive-through, I think it would have been better to get some close-ups, instead of just recording everything from the back seat. The audio could have been better, but I imagine your camera only has an internal mic. Also, I'm not sure if you were using a tripod during shooting, but some stationary shots could have used a bit more stabilization.

I hope that helps smile Overall, I really liked the vid! I also enjoy Taco Be--

*realizes it's 3:57 PM; leaves to do what must be done*

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