The Tale Of The Elements

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This is my story that I made. I don't know if I'll ever continue it, because I'm stuck on chapter eleven and I've thought up of another, non-fantasy story. But here it is. And if you steal it and get somewhere with it [which you won't because it sucks] it's been copyrighted by the communities that I've posted this with. So nyeh XD

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[Drysils Chosen]

Please don't post so much in such short time! Most people get very annoyed very quickly when there's so much to read on a single thread. Take it from me; no one reads mine because they're so long. I'd suggest you post one chapter every three days to a week. Give people an opportunity to read it piece by piece, instead of throwing it all at them at once.
I've posted six chapters from my book-in-progress (hardly the beginning!), over a span of about a month and a half. But still, the chapters are so long no one bothers to read it all. I put my chapters on different threads, but it doesn't seem to work very well. I put links to the older chapters just to keep it straightened out.
I do want to read your story, but I'm very short on time nowadays, so I'd just suggest that for the future.