Norac

Is this good?

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[Eric_Draven7685]

[Mango-Punch]

Well, I don't have too much to say, its interesting. The section where he enters the woods, near the bottom switches tenses though, it breaks the flow of your the prolougue.

[Eric_Draven7685]

Mango-Punch

Well, I don't have too much to say, its interesting. The section where he enters the woods, near the bottom switches tenses though, it breaks the flow of your the prolougue.

ya, i know i gotta fix that. sry.

[Eric_Draven7685]