Ukamiyasha
what the heck was that?!! talk about a stupid poem. you've got the rhyming thing down but dang you need better words!
Ahem. The least you can do is give constructive criticism, or you're just as intelligent as you say my poem is.
Also, it's not like it's meant to tell a story. It's just a little poem I wrote randomly. Perhaps it doesn't need to be descriptive. Maybe I left it open to interpretation.
The so-called "bumble bee" was not necessarily meant to be taken literally, either. It's more of a metaphor. But I suppose since my poem is "stupid," that isn't obvious.