Wake up mister Freeman.

[mobileslayer]

I've been practicing drawing as of lat and I've decided to try to get better at people. This is my second go at it. An old but rememberable game character that everyone knows. ^^ Would like it if you told me what you thought of it.

[mobileslayer]

Guess nothing. Meh

[Satsumas]

Hmm.
It's very blurry and light...
I would suggest adding a lot more contrast.

[chortlexu]

The colors look washed out. Try to make them more vibrant next time. Also don't try to shade with black or what ever that darker color is on his skin. It looks bad.

I think you did pretty good for a beginner. Try drawing some faces from photos or real life and look up a book on drawings heads. That along with practice and I think you'll be well on your way.

[Nitori Tenshi]

Thats pretty good for your second go at it :3...I would suggest not working in color for now.. focus on black and white. That way you can get the lighting right which is very very very important when it comes to life drawing.

[Evil Creampuff]

Boy, that sure is a really really pale drawing. Boost up those colours. ; )

[mobileslayer]

Thanks for giving me pointers everyone. Appreciated all of them.