rough sketch, opinions please though

[Shyloh]

<img src="http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v240/shyloh/couple01.jpg">

keep in mind just a sketch, but I was looking for any ideas of improvements, only from people who actually draw as well though...

[Shyloh]

bump?

[Grimma]

no bumpy! *slaps wrist*

their heads are too small, but it ain't a total loss wink

[Red_Wing]

anatomy

the shoulders are too big for the heads/bodies
the arm is way to skinny on the girl and to flimsy on the guy
the fingers look messed up but i cant tell, its too messy (jeeze, charcole?)

and no offense but the girl up front looks like a guy, and vice versa with the person in the back

[Shyloh]

the faces make them look like the wrong gender or the bodies? I appreciate all the notes... I don't offend easily, I know I'm no great artist so this is helpful for me! ^.^ sorry about the bump, just wasn't sure if anyone would notice it... sweatdrop

[Red_Wing]

in this forum, theres bound to be at least 10 views, if not more

people are just too lazy to post
have nothing to post
dont want to post
or they know they have to post too much

[Shyloh]

Shyloh

the faces make them look like the wrong gender or the bodies? I appreciate all the notes... I don't offend easily, I know I'm no great artist so this is helpful for me! ^.^ sorry about the bump, just wasn't sure if anyone would notice it... sweatdrop

sorry can you answer that too?