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Pink_Snipist Report | 02/20/2010 2:44 am

You're terrible... at memory... hehehe ^^

Intoxicated Lullaby Report | 10/26/2009 2:17 pm

~hello

xXxLoving_PandaxXx Report | 10/23/2009 12:53 am

This poem is about a boy that was going to propose to a girl but he was too scared so he wrote it all down in a note. He was driving her to the beach so he could give her the note, but on the way they were in a car accident. He was left in a coma, but the girl was completely unharmed. The girl has to decide what to do.....

Moments slow down, fear does not exist
Running to their death, another name on the list
Write a little note, promise you will be ok
Don’t hang up, even though you have nothing to say





Listen to the music, I always play it for you
Your favorite song, I’ve been here all the time if only you knew
I hold you hand, they tell me you are sleeping
I smile and say I’m fine, because you are the one from which blood is seeping





The doctor explains what is wrong, I turn away
"He will be out for a while" he tries to say
Nothing they can do but sit and wait, you were going to propose
My head rests on your pillow, your eyes tightly closed





I watch you counting each breath, your little note still in you hand,
I read the first line, and now I understand
For when you wake up and I know that you will, you can ask me for the first time
And finally, after I have waited so long you will be mine





Glancing at the calendar, I notice its almost been a year
I miss you voice and the way that you smile, I trust you though I have no fear
"HE WILL WAKE UP!" I tell them all, none of them believe me
"Its been a year, there is nothing they can do" my sister explains quietly





I will wait forever, no matter how long
I trust you completely, nothing is wrong
Ignore them when they talk like your not here
You are only sleeping, doctors and nurses all start to leer





Leave us alone! I want them to leave
The doctor grabs my hand, he takes you away from me
Your breathing slows down, nurses rush around
I memorized you note, I recite it without a sound





They close the curtains, I cant see into your room
Voices talking, starting to panic, "it will happen soon"
"It will be fine! They try to reassure
I scream each word in you note, I know what I am doing this for





Breathe for me, just one last time,
please let me see him, I know he wont be fine
Finally I get in to the room, tears in my eyes
Still you don’t wake, "he is leaving, its no surprise"





I scream as loud as I can, "ASK ME!"
ASK ME JUST ONCE! shaking you body, you want to be free
Don’t leave me now, Squeezing you hand I say a prayer
"Everyone has left us alone" I whisper in your ear, pushing back your hair





I have been counting the days, Its been over a year
I still say that same prayer, everyday in you ear
Today for the first time you open your eyes, I cannot speak
"Who are you?" you say, your voice cracked and weak.

xXxLoving_PandaxXx Report | 10/23/2009 12:52 am

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failxxx Report | 10/19/2009 10:43 pm

Sighs. I guess I'll talk to you later maybe. I guess I'm not important cause you left me in the rally without even saying bye or I love you. crying

iKinky x3 Report | 08/16/2009 9:44 am

Oh I See.

1-800suPerMan- Report | 08/15/2009 10:28 pm

~pokes~ =|

1-800suPerMan- Report | 08/15/2009 10:17 pm

uhhh r u ok??

1-800suPerMan- Report | 08/15/2009 10:06 pm

kool

1-800suPerMan- Report | 08/15/2009 10:05 pm

oh